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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Harley in Diamante Form"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from boberto
Hey, Patty: You sure have that right. Can't say that I like this format, but I certyainly do the theme of the verse. This is a cute little guy. I he the one you hust brought home a while back?'
Happy holidays.
boberto
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Hey, Patty: You sure have that right. Can't say that I like this format, but I certyainly do the theme of the verse. This is a cute little guy. I he the one you hust brought home a while back?'
Happy holidays.
boberto
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. YES - this is Harley - the newest member of our family. ~patty~
Comment from honeytree
I really love the art work and the very creative words here for the very special dog in the picture.
Our pets tell us in their own way, when they are not well, sad and hungry.
Our pets are a part of our lives and show their love in many ways.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I really love the art work and the very creative words here for the very special dog in the picture.
Our pets tell us in their own way, when they are not well, sad and hungry.
Our pets are a part of our lives and show their love in many ways.
Honey tree
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from Patricia Crandall
I am not familiar with the Diamante and I would struggle to write one. You have done well and I enjoy the words you have used to describe your pal and buddy. Author notes helped me to understand the poem. Patricia Crandall
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I am not familiar with the Diamante and I would struggle to write one. You have done well and I enjoy the words you have used to describe your pal and buddy. Author notes helped me to understand the poem. Patricia Crandall
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from RebelRose
I am not at all familiar with this type of poem but from your description, looks like you did it right. I like it. It definitely describes "man's (or woman's) best friend."
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I am not at all familiar with this type of poem but from your description, looks like you did it right. I like it. It definitely describes "man's (or woman's) best friend."
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from Fireshadow
Patty, this is a terrific and perfectly structured diamante poem - and tribute to Harley (in my mind he'll always be "Bandit" - LOL). Hope Simba and the rest of the kitties have welcomed him. Great work, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Patty, this is a terrific and perfectly structured diamante poem - and tribute to Harley (in my mind he'll always be "Bandit" - LOL). Hope Simba and the rest of the kitties have welcomed him. Great work, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. (My husband aced everyone out with 'Harley' He was supposed to get a motorcycle this year, and instead we ended up getting a dog - seemed only fair to name him 'Harley Davidson') I greatly appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from misscookie
What a lovely picture of Buddy.
Your poem him to a tea
Through your words I can sense the loving relationship you have with him.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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What a lovely picture of Buddy.
Your poem him to a tea
Through your words I can sense the loving relationship you have with him.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I greatly appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
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Your very welcome.
Comment from lola29
Harley is simply adorable, and from his picture, I'd say he is very comfortable being your little buddy. Aren't the little ones just the best.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Harley is simply adorable, and from his picture, I'd say he is very comfortable being your little buddy. Aren't the little ones just the best.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Animal prose and poetry are my niche, and I will continue to work them. This endeavor of writing different forms from the book I have may be my undoing, but it is fun. I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from missy98writer
mustangpatty,
your Dimante poem is in great form. Adorable photo of the dog. I'm a cat lover myself, but I admire dogs. I enjoyed the lines: "Loving, licking, jumping Loyal, attentive, agreeable, friend Greeting, yelping, kissing." I need to try this interesting form of poetry. Have a wonderful Holiday.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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mustangpatty,
your Dimante poem is in great form. Adorable photo of the dog. I'm a cat lover myself, but I admire dogs. I enjoyed the lines: "Loving, licking, jumping Loyal, attentive, agreeable, friend Greeting, yelping, kissing." I need to try this interesting form of poetry. Have a wonderful Holiday.
Melissa.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Animal prose and poetry are my niche, and I will continue to work them. This endeavor of writing different forms from the book I have may be my undoing, but it is fun. I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from words
As a dog lover and a person who travels everywhere with her canine companion ...I had to love this one. LOL
Yup, dogs are the best of pals and buddies:
Loyal, attentive, agreeable, friend
Greeting, yelping, kissing
Devoted, attached
BUDDY
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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As a dog lover and a person who travels everywhere with her canine companion ...I had to love this one. LOL
Yup, dogs are the best of pals and buddies:
Loyal, attentive, agreeable, friend
Greeting, yelping, kissing
Devoted, attached
BUDDY
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Animal prose and poetry are my niche, and I will continue to work them. This endeavor of writing different forms from the book I have may be my undoing, but it is fun. I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from Connie P
I'm very impressed with the form and your little fellow is adorable. He looks so much like mine did when he was a little guy.
Great post, Patty!
Connie
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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I'm very impressed with the form and your little fellow is adorable. He looks so much like mine did when he was a little guy.
Great post, Patty!
Connie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Animal prose and poetry are my niche, and I will continue to work them. This endeavor of writing different forms from the book I have may be my undoing, but it is fun. I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
