Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Harley in Diamante Form"...musings on the pets I've had
72 total reviews
Comment from Matoshka
You have written in your words, every thing a puppy is. This was just beautiful. Your picture, I think of your sweet little ball of joy, is yours? This was so sweet. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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You have written in your words, every thing a puppy is. This was just beautiful. Your picture, I think of your sweet little ball of joy, is yours? This was so sweet. Good luck in the contest. Blessings.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review - yes, the picture is of Harley. Although he has only been here a week, he has completely captured my heart. Thank you so much. ~patty~
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You are so welcome Patty, he looks like a joy. Blessings.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is diamonte poem follows all the rules of the form. I'm guessing the name of the cute little dog in the picture is "Harley Davidson"--quite a name for a little guy like him to live up to. [Note: Some inappropriate question marks show up in your notes. I've had that happen before and have found I can go back and quickly edit the text again, press "save" at the bottom of the edit screen, and it comes out with the punctuation I want.] Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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This is diamonte poem follows all the rules of the form. I'm guessing the name of the cute little dog in the picture is "Harley Davidson"--quite a name for a little guy like him to live up to. [Note: Some inappropriate question marks show up in your notes. I've had that happen before and have found I can go back and quickly edit the text again, press "save" at the bottom of the edit screen, and it comes out with the punctuation I want.] Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Harley IS an amazing puppy who I KNOW will grow into his name. Thanks for the advice on the notes. ~patty~
Comment from Addy García
Mustangpatty:
Perfect for a pet adjectives that show how important they are in our lives, for the love they have and what make us when we are with them.
Congratulations for making this tribute to them in these beautiful verses.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Mustangpatty:
Perfect for a pet adjectives that show how important they are in our lives, for the love they have and what make us when we are with them.
Congratulations for making this tribute to them in these beautiful verses.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Minglement
I'm not familiar with this form, but you've used it well to describe what appears to be a very realistic description of this adorable puppy. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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I'm not familiar with this form, but you've used it well to describe what appears to be a very realistic description of this adorable puppy. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Cedar
This is a great poem about your pal. I've been around dogs for 65 years and each and everyone that I've had
has been a wonderful companion. In my experience, you will never find a human that will love or want to be you more than this little fellow. Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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This is a great poem about your pal. I've been around dogs for 65 years and each and everyone that I've had
has been a wonderful companion. In my experience, you will never find a human that will love or want to be you more than this little fellow. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Dogs are truly a wonderful gift - I've had two before, but its been over 10 years since a dog shared my life. I appreciate your comments - you, too, have a wonderful and blessed Christmas! ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Beautifully written and oh, so, cuddly. This is a very complicated poem it seems to me-maybe someday I'll know enough to give it a try! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Beautifully written and oh, so, cuddly. This is a very complicated poem it seems to me-maybe someday I'll know enough to give it a try! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I really do appreciate you following this little book. ~patty~
Comment from Aletheia
I have never seen this form before, but you did a fantastic job with it. The sentiment behind your words is truly felt by this reader. I think it's so sweet, and I feel the same way about my pooch. :)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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I have never seen this form before, but you did a fantastic job with it. The sentiment behind your words is truly felt by this reader. I think it's so sweet, and I feel the same way about my pooch. :)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I appreciate your kind remarks. Merry Christmas to you and yours! ~patty~
Comment from Herb
A good little poem once again. I would find this strict form very hard; yet they are certanily good writing exercises if anything. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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A good little poem once again. I would find this strict form very hard; yet they are certanily good writing exercises if anything. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and valuable feedback. ~patty~
Comment from marcellawachtel
A very complicated way of saying all those nice things about your new dog. It reads very nicely and as a visual, it is also a very successful poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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A very complicated way of saying all those nice things about your new dog. It reads very nicely and as a visual, it is also a very successful poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. The Diamante was a good poem to kick off this book of poetry about pets - some of the other formats will be difficult for me, but I will include all of the rules in my Author Notes so the entire FS community can help me, and make sure I'm doing the forms justice. I greatly appreciate your time in reading and reviewing. ~patty~
Comment from heyjude
Patty, aren't puppies adorable. They bring so much fun
into your life. Wow. You have covered the gamut of what
puppies do. They get so excited. They sure can entertain
you.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Patty, aren't puppies adorable. They bring so much fun
into your life. Wow. You have covered the gamut of what
puppies do. They get so excited. They sure can entertain
you.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. Your kind remarks are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
