Barstools and Bethlehem
What would Jesus do?24 total reviews
Comment from Aislinge
Interesting little story. A peaceable ending to what could have been a brawl. My guess is this story takes place in modern days. Technically, the piece is fine.
If this is supposed to take place centuries ago, there are a few nits in the content. Christians aren't necessarily white. People who followed Jesus' teachings were not called Christians until after he died. And Muslims likely didn't come into being as a group until later, since they see Jesus as a prophet who came before Mohammed.
All in all, a great read. Thanks!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2010
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Interesting little story. A peaceable ending to what could have been a brawl. My guess is this story takes place in modern days. Technically, the piece is fine.
If this is supposed to take place centuries ago, there are a few nits in the content. Christians aren't necessarily white. People who followed Jesus' teachings were not called Christians until after he died. And Muslims likely didn't come into being as a group until later, since they see Jesus as a prophet who came before Mohammed.
All in all, a great read. Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2010
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Hi Aislinge! Thank YOU! I wanted this to be in the present? So, hope it was okay. I know I pushed the limits a little, as I am no theologist...but wanted to try something different. Thank you so much for understanding!! Susan
Comment from BethShelby
Very good, Susan. I think you have captured the essence of many so called Christians attitude. They are looking for a fight and I wonder how they would react if Jesus himself was present. It isn't so much about the man as it is being right about their own position. I think it is a little like politics. I don't thing right or wrong plays into many people positions. It is which political side do you represent.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Very good, Susan. I think you have captured the essence of many so called Christians attitude. They are looking for a fight and I wonder how they would react if Jesus himself was present. It isn't so much about the man as it is being right about their own position. I think it is a little like politics. I don't thing right or wrong plays into many people positions. It is which political side do you represent.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Yes! You are so right Beth. It's so disheartening too. So very much. I wish Jesus would come to us and appear on EVERY news channel, just appear...and speak. I really think that would change our world. All He would have to do would be talk...I believe. I don't know. Well, Merry Christmas Beth, thank you for being here! Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Thanks for sharing with me . A good write with good flow and imagery need no edit. Hi Susan do you think we could have a modern Jesus in our bars. Happy holidays and New year. Mary
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thanks for sharing with me . A good write with good flow and imagery need no edit. Hi Susan do you think we could have a modern Jesus in our bars. Happy holidays and New year. Mary
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Hi Mary! I doubt it Mary, but I was trying to make a point! It would be neat tho, I want to see Him now! Just for a short visit. HERE...") I know, I'm silly. ") Susan
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You're not silly we all want to see him. Mary
Comment from CodyJack
Not in my town, you arn't." (aren't) Left out the e
This was very deep and made for good thought pondering. How we judge each other is sad and you broguht it out here so much. Jesus doesn't want us to fight in his name but to be good examples. Good one. Your friend, Cody
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Not in my town, you arn't." (aren't) Left out the e
This was very deep and made for good thought pondering. How we judge each other is sad and you broguht it out here so much. Jesus doesn't want us to fight in his name but to be good examples. Good one. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 19-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Oh Cody, thank you! I fixed the misspell! I always spell aren't wrong...so sad. I am so happy you liked this too. I can go take a nap now and sleep well. I love Christmas. Thanks you!! Susan
