Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Chapter 12; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from animatqua
I saw your latest post and realized I needed to do some catching up on the story before I read it. I am mindful of your limited energy, so please don't feel like you need to answer each comment. I'm making them so you will get credit for the reviews.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
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I saw your latest post and realized I needed to do some catching up on the story before I read it. I am mindful of your limited energy, so please don't feel like you need to answer each comment. I'm making them so you will get credit for the reviews.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2010
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I feel if you are willing to read my posts when the bonsus points aren't there, then I should at least answer. I appreciate you reading.
Comment from essence56
Thank you for such an awesome begginning and ending. It has appeared as if I have lived on edge for this ending of happiness. So much of this story was what goes on in the world on an regular basis. I know someone was able to relate to this one. Thank you and barbara please take care and look forward to seeing alot more of you.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for such an awesome begginning and ending. It has appeared as if I have lived on edge for this ending of happiness. So much of this story was what goes on in the world on an regular basis. I know someone was able to relate to this one. Thank you and barbara please take care and look forward to seeing alot more of you.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Hi I just finished reading the chapter before this and this one. Both are very good, and did not find any errors.
I'll bet it has amazed you the way it did me, the folks who help out. Like you said - they're angels. Gonna go read the next chapter. Blessings
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Hi I just finished reading the chapter before this and this one. Both are very good, and did not find any errors.
I'll bet it has amazed you the way it did me, the folks who help out. Like you said - they're angels. Gonna go read the next chapter. Blessings
Comment Written 16-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from sweetsilversong
Enjoyed reading this chapter very much, Barbara.
It kept my interest till the end.
I found myself below, looking to the sky as the men dropped from the helicopters.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Enjoyed reading this chapter very much, Barbara.
It kept my interest till the end.
I found myself below, looking to the sky as the men dropped from the helicopters.
Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes.
SSS
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Herb
I liked this chapter but there is a lot going on which I found a little confusing. This is probably because I haven't read any of the others. The diversion tactic seemed a little amateurish for agents and a little desperate but maybe that's the point?
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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I liked this chapter but there is a lot going on which I found a little confusing. This is probably because I haven't read any of the others. The diversion tactic seemed a little amateurish for agents and a little desperate but maybe that's the point?
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Arkine
First, I'm glad to hear things are going well with the chemo.
I missed a chapter or two, but it looks like Joe might have himself in a bit of a spot now. Obviously, the guys aren't getting out of this, but will they kill the hostages before they go down? Good chapter! :)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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First, I'm glad to hear things are going well with the chemo.
I missed a chapter or two, but it looks like Joe might have himself in a bit of a spot now. Obviously, the guys aren't getting out of this, but will they kill the hostages before they go down? Good chapter! :)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Jonez08
Oh my, things about to get interesting. Great cliff hanger. You've done a good job moving the story. I envy you because I can't seem to find time to write much lately. Hopefully, I'll post soon. I look forward to your next chapter!!
He glanced in the direction that( )voice came from and saw the dark shadow of a female figure shielding a larger male figure.
--(something is missing. Maybe: He glanced in the direction that (the)voice came from or He glanced in the direction (of the) --I like the second better
Cassandra
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Oh my, things about to get interesting. Great cliff hanger. You've done a good job moving the story. I envy you because I can't seem to find time to write much lately. Hopefully, I'll post soon. I look forward to your next chapter!!
He glanced in the direction that( )voice came from and saw the dark shadow of a female figure shielding a larger male figure.
--(something is missing. Maybe: He glanced in the direction that (the)voice came from or He glanced in the direction (of the) --I like the second better
Cassandra
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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I am sure the holiday season has you bogged down. Once things settle, I am sure you will be writing your usual wonderful story. Thank you for kind review.
Comment from Max Edon
I thought that this story was very well written and exciting. It was fast paced and full of action. It ended on a tense note.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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I thought that this story was very well written and exciting. It was fast paced and full of action. It ended on a tense note.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Nefarioushibachi
I think this chapter has a very good tempo and pace. Sometimes these chapters in romance novels tend to drag, but this one moved along well. The only part that was a bit abrupt was the sentence "Joe I love you" it just seemed a little bit out of place in the rest of the story.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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I think this chapter has a very good tempo and pace. Sometimes these chapters in romance novels tend to drag, but this one moved along well. The only part that was a bit abrupt was the sentence "Joe I love you" it just seemed a little bit out of place in the rest of the story.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review. It wouldn't be ouf of place if you had followed the story. This is the first time Sara has told Joe, she loves him and they had a discussion about her not being able to say it before Joe left.
Comment from lisasolorio1
As a new reviewer I hope I am doing this correctly. I like your style of writing as well and believe me, a lot of work on this site I believe is a lot of individual talent. Your story so far seems entertaining and when you read I can see it in my head like a movie. Nice job.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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As a new reviewer I hope I am doing this correctly. I like your style of writing as well and believe me, a lot of work on this site I believe is a lot of individual talent. Your story so far seems entertaining and when you read I can see it in my head like a movie. Nice job.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and good luck on the site.
