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Simba's Dilemma

Simba gets some bad news

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Comment from apky
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He could still hear the approach of what he liked to think of as his "temporary" humans, even though nine years of not hunting or living outside had affected his hearing. Gregory and Austin were home from work, and that meant food, and scratches, and good conversation and playtime. Maybe they would get the big red dot out! Simba loved to chase the dot. It took him time to understand that he was supposed to chase it and not just watch it bounce around the room, but now it was the highlight of the day, and he rarely let Mufasa chase it alone.

I could share the joy with Simba.

Always,
Aki

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 06-May-2017
    Hi Aki; thank you for reading this story about Simba. He has a few more stories in the book; I loved to write about him. I'm glad you enjoyed this story, and I'm happy you're coming along for the ride,
    ~patty~
Comment from Mabaker
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Oh, do you have editing woes to? God I thought it was only me LOL so lovely to read Simba's life story and I sincerely hope your homecoming was as trouble-free as we humans can make it. Great story, Sincerely Anne.

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi; Simba was one of those cats that just had so much personality - and such a big heart. He was great, and the part about my homecoming will be posted in a few days - thank you for reading,
    ~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Simba was obviously a lovely cat also -
each have their own character. I sometimes
think that it is not us who train our animals
but they that train us humans.

Simba was certainly a black beauty. I love all animals,
but as a dog lover, have never owned a cat, altho I
do look after them when their owners are away -
they each have their own personality.

Thanks for sharing this, Patty.
Margaret

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi Margaret; thank you for sharing Simba's story with me. He was a joy to have grace my home. He brought me love and laughter. I'm glad you enjoyed the read,
    ~patty~
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
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A great prose and these are beautiful phrases, "all he had to do was entertain his humans by "talking" and pawing at them so they would pet his head, or scratch his belly, It took him time to understand that he was supposed to chase it and not just watch it bounce around the room". Have a great day. Namaste

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    thank you so much for reading one of my Simba stories. He was an incredible cat, and he was quite the inspiration while he graced my life. I'm glad you enjoyed this installment of his life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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I enjoyed meeting Simba and what a delightful story. You fully described his day, the normal cat day in that way that shows that you really know your pets. I love how you can put words to their possible thoughts so realistically.

This is a beautiful cat in the photo. I love that black shiny fur and his eyes are so beautiful. He is a very good looking cat. I am enjoying meeting the pets and I am loving these Pet stories.

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi Tier; I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. Simba was one of the most beautiful cats I've ever met. He also had the biggest personality,
    ~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Another cute story. Simba seems to be a special cat. I've never seen one like him. I used to have cats, but when I married a man who's allergic to them, I had to switch to small, catlike dogs. I still miss the purring. :)

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi; thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you stopped by to read and review. Your comments are greatly appreciated,
    ~patty~
Comment from JJInfinity805
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This was great! I've seen a few children's books here and there speaking from an animal's perspective but not one in such a sophisticated tone and I'm a huge fan of it.

 Comment Written 05-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi; thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you stopped by to read and review. Your comments are greatly appreciated,
    ~patty~
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

Your cat, Simba, sounds like the Boss Cat of the household, where ever he happens to be. I like the way you described him. I will have to read more of your pet tales.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi Gypsy; thank you for reading about Simba. He was indeed the boss wherever he went. He took care of the puppy, too. I'm glad you're willing to read along with the stories - I hope you enjoy them,
    ~patty~
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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So very well written in the language of Simba and putting yourself into what he may think and feel and remember, was absolutlely wonderful. No problems noted and a joy to read

 Comment Written 04-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi Barb; thank you so much for stopping by to read a 'Simba story.' He has several stories in the book I'm putting together. He was quite inspirational,
    ~patty~
Comment from emptypage
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Poor kitty is in for a big surprise, no? I haven't ever had cats because I'm allergic, but my aunt always had one dog and two or three cats. She recognized the issues between the species enough to keep them from killing each other, but I never got how that worked. I'll be watching to see how Simba does.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017


reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Hi Marla; thank you so much for reading this story about Simba - he did okay with the puppy. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the series,
    ~patty~
    ps; its easy to have cats and dogs - just make sure the cats are bigger and older when you introduce the dogs - they will keep them in line