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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Puppy Love"
...musings on the pets I've had

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Dogs are my favourite animals..
although I love all wild-life too.

This is a sweet little poem
your words oozing with excitement

I'm sure he'll wrap you around his little paw.

Margaret.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm pretty sure he will wrap me around his paw, too. Can't wait to spoil him!! ~patty~
Comment from JennieClare
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And you've captured your excitement in this poem. They are little scamps aren't they? You are in for a lot of fun. Great little rhyme! Jennieclare

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm SO looking forward to having a puppy in the house!! ~patty~
reply by JennieClare on 01-Dec-2010
    You are most welcome. You'll have to let us know how you get on. Jennie
Comment from Perp Ihebom
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THIS IS A NICE SIMPLE PIECE OF POETRY THAT SHARES AN EXPERIENCE ABOUT PUPPIES. i LIKE THE NICE RHYMES YOU CREATED. Nice rhythm too. kudos

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you liked it. ~patty~
Comment from sweetsilversong
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Really enjoyed your poem Patty.
Your puppy looks sooo cute.
i can tell are feeling joy as you wrote this.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a great day.

SSS

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm glad my joy shines through on this-I'm incredibly excited!! ~patty~
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Hi Mustangpatty. I really enjoyed this delightful birth announcement/poem. You are a very lucky lady. How about Scamp? Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you for reading and the generous review. You know, you're the second person to suggest, "Scamp," - I guess he must look like one! I will put it in the "hopper." I will keep you all posted on his progress. ~patty~
reply by Writingfundimension on 01-Dec-2010
    Haha, two votes for Scamp. Looking forward to hearing more about the little feller.
Comment from FredCollingwood
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Thee is nothing cuter than puppies. You can't go wrong writing about them and you did a wonderful job. I love it!

Well done!

Fred

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review - I have to agree; all of the stories I write about animals are warmly received. Can't wait till he gets here -- Dec 18th! ~patty~
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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He's SO cute!! I loved this celebratory poem, I think this would be a great child's poem as well. I liked the sweetness of the words. So very nice!
:)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. He will be coming to live with us on Dec 18th, . .and I need to get this place "puppy proof." Too much fun! ~patty~
Comment from boberto
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Not original, but the first name I thought of when I looked at the picture, was Spanky. Then, I kept looking ar for some special feature or marking that would prompt a name--no luck. We have saved 14 kittens and two pups since moving to Alabama. All are fixed and get the works--cost us a fortune---in July, $5,000 on just 3 of them. November 20, 11:55 AM, I lost my best friend--my right arm. I will never get over it. Two poems for him in my portfolio, "My Best Friend," and, "When Is It Time To Say Goodbye."

The last kitten we saved, we named based on his markings--Pe`pe le Pew.
Good Luck
boberto

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Thank you for reading and sharing your incredible story- God bless you for saving all those babies!! I read "When Is It Time to Say Goodbye?" and I cried for a bit. Thanks for the generous review, and I will put "Spanky" in the pile. ~patty~
reply by boberto on 01-Dec-2010
    Thanks, Patty---and I got your comments on "PA Blues." Thanks--Good/valid suggestion and I made it.
    boberto
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    glad to help - I always tender advice carefully on here. I enjoy reading your prose. ~patty~
reply by boberto on 01-Dec-2010
    Thanks. More on the way.
Comment from annettebda
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No worries the energy behind this write more then compensates for any shortcomings...this puppy is soooooo cute, his face is almost like a panda, how about Bamboo as a name for him!

Annette

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    Bamboo -- cute! Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm so excited about him, and looking forward to Dec 18th, when he gets released from "puppy jail." ~patty~
Comment from ejebb1951
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For some strange reason, I just knew it had to be you MP. I bet you couldn't sleep last night, thinking about your baby. It gets worse you know and hopefully he's not the jealous type. It's so much fun girl. They make you laugh so hard you can't get mad. You should frame this one for your baby.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2010


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
    How did YOU know I couldn't sleep last night? And he isn't even with me yet!!! He gets to come and live with me on Dec 18th, which gives me plenty of time to "puppy proof" the place. Thanks for reading and the generous review! ~patty~
reply by ejebb1951 on 01-Dec-2010
    Because I did the same thing waiting for our Aussie puppie a couple of years ago. She had to be "fixed" also so we had to go shopping for her arrival and you are so welcome.