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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Puppy Love"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from Brad Sterling
Great to read some good news in this sad world - and your little dog should be wagging his tail with delight at your lovely poem - joy shines throghout your verse - many happy years with your new pet..regards Brad.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Great to read some good news in this sad world - and your little dog should be wagging his tail with delight at your lovely poem - joy shines throghout your verse - many happy years with your new pet..regards Brad.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review! I am SO excited about this newest member of my family - he will be coming to join us on Dec 17th - and I can't wait! Thanks, again.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Oh he is cute and he looks mischievous. A good write with good imagery and good flow. I like your art work it blends well with your script. Thanks for sharing with me. Mary
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Oh he is cute and he looks mischievous. A good write with good imagery and good flow. I like your art work it blends well with your script. Thanks for sharing with me. Mary
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review! I am SO excited about this newest member of my family - he will be coming to join us on Dec 17th - and I can't wait! Thanks, again.
Comment from juliaSjames
I can't resist your poem, forced rhyme and all!! It is overflowing with your excitement. Why, if you had a tail it would be wagging furiously right now. LOL.
Welcome to your December puppy.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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I can't resist your poem, forced rhyme and all!! It is overflowing with your excitement. Why, if you had a tail it would be wagging furiously right now. LOL.
Welcome to your December puppy.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review! (I love your comment about my "wagging tail," made me laugh so hard.) I am SO excited about this newest member of my family - he will be coming to join us on Dec 17th - and I can't wait! Thanks, again.
Comment from Triple P
Cute little poem, and neat tribute to your new puppy. Your joy and excitement shine throughout. And I love how the last stanza grounds the narrator back into reality.
Blessings on your new little 'boy',
Patrick.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Cute little poem, and neat tribute to your new puppy. Your joy and excitement shine throughout. And I love how the last stanza grounds the narrator back into reality.
Blessings on your new little 'boy',
Patrick.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review! I am SO excited about this newest member of my family - he will be coming to join us on Dec 17th - and I can't wait! Thanks, again.
Comment from Babibrn
STARTING WITH YOUR PHOTO. HE IS ADORABLE,BLAK AND WHITE PRICELESS!! THE POEM FLOWS WELL.VERBIAGE IS GOOD. DESCRIPTIONS OF CUTE AND CUDDLE IS WONDERFUL. THANK YOU FOR WRITTING IT.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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STARTING WITH YOUR PHOTO. HE IS ADORABLE,BLAK AND WHITE PRICELESS!! THE POEM FLOWS WELL.VERBIAGE IS GOOD. DESCRIPTIONS OF CUTE AND CUDDLE IS WONDERFUL. THANK YOU FOR WRITTING IT.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and the generous review! I am SO excited about this newest member of my family - he will be coming to join us on Dec 17th - and I can't wait! Thanks, again.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
he looks just precious, what type of puppy is he? i have been trying to get my husband to let me get another puppy for three years. he keeps saying no. i'll wear him down.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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he looks just precious, what type of puppy is he? i have been trying to get my husband to let me get another puppy for three years. he keeps saying no. i'll wear him down.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Will is a Jack Russell Terrier -- I've been looking at this breed for years! He met my criteria - the mask, the tricolored markings and some additional markings on the body -- I'm SO excited! Thanks for sharing my joy!
Comment from fictionwriter
Puppies are wonderful, I know exactly how that feels. What breed of puppy, looks almost like a wire fox puppy. I love those little terriers, they're so full of energy. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Puppies are wonderful, I know exactly how that feels. What breed of puppy, looks almost like a wire fox puppy. I love those little terriers, they're so full of energy. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Will is a Jack Russell Terrier -- I've been looking at this breed for years! He met my criteria - the mask, the tricolored markings and some additional markings on the body -- I'm SO excited! Thanks for sharing my joy!
Comment from koneart
So, is that a picture of your new puppy? You knowthis would be a great child's poem. Get some cute little photos of puppies and boys [or girls] playing together. I liked the sweetness of the words. So very nice. Kone
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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So, is that a picture of your new puppy? You knowthis would be a great child's poem. Get some cute little photos of puppies and boys [or girls] playing together. I liked the sweetness of the words. So very nice. Kone
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Will is a Jack Russell Terrier -- I've been looking at this breed for years! (YES - this is his photo.) He met my criteria - the mask, the tricolored markings and some additional markings on the body -- I'm SO excited! Thanks for sharing my joy! I love the idea of making this a child's poem - thanks for the idea!
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He is SOOOOO cute! My sister has a Jack named Daisy. Man! That dog is SPOILED! Have fun.....
Comment from Lekatt
This writing brought a smile to my face, it is warm and tender like little puppies. You have a way with words, I throughly enjoy this, it was great.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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This writing brought a smile to my face, it is warm and tender like little puppies. You have a way with words, I throughly enjoy this, it was great.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Will is a Jack Russell Terrier -- I've been looking at this breed for years! He met my criteria - the mask, the tricolored markings and some additional markings on the body -- I'm SO excited! Thanks for sharing my joy!
Comment from Valkarie
You've written this little poem with such glee as it shows in the words here. So loving and sincere this piece flows with an excitement that is awaiting something new to arrive. Your dialogue is visual and artistic with that emotional feel that is eloquently written and which the reader can also feel.
We all want to see this new arrival when you collect him so post a picture on your site. Great poem
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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You've written this little poem with such glee as it shows in the words here. So loving and sincere this piece flows with an excitement that is awaiting something new to arrive. Your dialogue is visual and artistic with that emotional feel that is eloquently written and which the reader can also feel.
We all want to see this new arrival when you collect him so post a picture on your site. Great poem
Valkarie...
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Wow - I am SO glad that my joy shows in my writing! To be sure - pictures will be posted of Will when he gets here. Thank you for reading!
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Ha Will, I look forward to seeing the little fellow. V...
