Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Chapter 11; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from LadyWave
Short but sweet chapter :) I love the mushy stuff and was happy to see more of it :) Hope you are doing well and I'm looking forward to big confrontation coming up!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Short but sweet chapter :) I love the mushy stuff and was happy to see more of it :) Hope you are doing well and I'm looking forward to big confrontation coming up!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
a wonderful chapter. It is so intense and it stays that way all the way through to the end. You continue to do an excellent job. Congrats on surviving round three, you continue to be in my prayers.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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a wonderful chapter. It is so intense and it stays that way all the way through to the end. You continue to do an excellent job. Congrats on surviving round three, you continue to be in my prayers.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued prayers.
Comment from bhogg
My only complaint was this was too short. I wanted to read more! You really know how to create and maintain tension, something I wish I could do better. How you are felling well! Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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My only complaint was this was too short. I wanted to read more! You really know how to create and maintain tension, something I wish I could do better. How you are felling well! Regards, Bill
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you Bill, for your kind review and support.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your good wishes for Thanksgiving and for letting us know how you are fairing. My positive thoughts are with you.
I admired your natural dialog and the way you wove in the potential danger of internet chat rooms. I also liked Sara's mom's philosophy about "good things never come easy." The last line added to the suspense of the story.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your good wishes for Thanksgiving and for letting us know how you are fairing. My positive thoughts are with you.
I admired your natural dialog and the way you wove in the potential danger of internet chat rooms. I also liked Sara's mom's philosophy about "good things never come easy." The last line added to the suspense of the story.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bowls
I'm glad to hear you've "survived" your three chemos and Thanksgiving dinner, as well. Thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes, but we Canadians had ours last month - but, better late than never!
I'm hoping something is about to break in the Cassie story line. Both Joe and Sara seem to be about at their wit's end. Just a couple of things: Joe says "Lay down and I'll hold you." Now, since it's dialogue, maybe you want him to say it that way, but correctly, it should be "Lie down".... Later on you write "He'd become accustom to"... which should be "He'd become accustomed to..." Thanks for another great chapter. I do look forward to each and every one of them.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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I'm glad to hear you've "survived" your three chemos and Thanksgiving dinner, as well. Thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes, but we Canadians had ours last month - but, better late than never!
I'm hoping something is about to break in the Cassie story line. Both Joe and Sara seem to be about at their wit's end. Just a couple of things: Joe says "Lay down and I'll hold you." Now, since it's dialogue, maybe you want him to say it that way, but correctly, it should be "Lie down".... Later on you write "He'd become accustom to"... which should be "He'd become accustomed to..." Thanks for another great chapter. I do look forward to each and every one of them.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Sorry about being a month late on your Thanksgiving wish. To be honest, I am struggling to keep track of dates right now. I missed my granddaughter's 7th birthday, but she forgave me. Thank you for catching those errors. I made the changes.
Comment from Writeaway...
Even though you are recieving treatment, I would not even realise it. Your writing is as strong as always barbara, a great read, I can suggest nothing for improvment excellent job. I am not overlly sure on what Thanksgiving is, I live in the UK and we don't celebrate it here. Excellent job, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Even though you are recieving treatment, I would not even realise it. Your writing is as strong as always barbara, a great read, I can suggest nothing for improvment excellent job. I am not overlly sure on what Thanksgiving is, I live in the UK and we don't celebrate it here. Excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Then I am not sure I should tell you about our Thanksgiving. After the Pilgrims landed in America their first winter was extremely hard. Many of them died, then that Spring the Native Americans helped them and after the harvest they had a three day celebration. A very quick history lesson. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sk42rn
The fact that you are writing shows that you survived your chemo. Please take care and stay inside away from sick folks. The respiratory stuff is starting.
Happy Thanksgiving. I hope you were able to eat and enjoy it. Chemo sometimes takes the taste out of things.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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The fact that you are writing shows that you survived your chemo. Please take care and stay inside away from sick folks. The respiratory stuff is starting.
Happy Thanksgiving. I hope you were able to eat and enjoy it. Chemo sometimes takes the taste out of things.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Chemo has changed my eating habits greatly. I teach first grade so I've already been placed on anitibotics once. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very interesting story. I like the romance as well as the intrigue. I can feel the anxiety Sara and Joe must be experiencing. The dialogue is excellent. I am looking forward to reading more.
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This is a very interesting story. I like the romance as well as the intrigue. I can feel the anxiety Sara and Joe must be experiencing. The dialogue is excellent. I am looking forward to reading more.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sibhus
A lot of descriptive action that gives an edgy feel to this chapter. You've mantained the tension, which grabs the readers attenion and makes them want to know what's next. Your charters have a good sense of being flesh and blood and the dioluge feels real. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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A lot of descriptive action that gives an edgy feel to this chapter. You've mantained the tension, which grabs the readers attenion and makes them want to know what's next. Your charters have a good sense of being flesh and blood and the dioluge feels real. Good chapter.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Good tension filled chapter. Now why would Joe suddenly think Sara doesn't love him? The things these perverts are doing make me nervous. I sure hope Cassie comes hom unblemished.
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Good tension filled chapter. Now why would Joe suddenly think Sara doesn't love him? The things these perverts are doing make me nervous. I sure hope Cassie comes hom unblemished.
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Sara has never told Joe she loves him.....
