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Comment from Gungalo
Well geesh, this guy is a real asshole and I hope in the end she gets him. Your write is riveting in that I couldn't stop reading it. That's a very good sign of an excellent writer.
Write on you, I need to know what is gonna happen next!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Well geesh, this guy is a real asshole and I hope in the end she gets him. Your write is riveting in that I couldn't stop reading it. That's a very good sign of an excellent writer.
Write on you, I need to know what is gonna happen next!!!!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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you're very kind, thank you. I'm glad you like it
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My pleasure, you!!!
Comment from Adri7enne
I get so caught up in the story, I forget to read critically. I didn't get caught up anywhere. Everything just flowed. It's great to read something that makes you forget you're supposed to be looking for errors.
Good story, snod. Your bad guys are getting pretty scary.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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I get so caught up in the story, I forget to read critically. I didn't get caught up anywhere. Everything just flowed. It's great to read something that makes you forget you're supposed to be looking for errors.
Good story, snod. Your bad guys are getting pretty scary.
Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you. I particularly like Babs. There's something scary about a vicious den mother.
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Kinky! LOL!
