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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Heart Talk"...musings on us
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Comment from Gungalo
What a sweet little love poem girl. I love it and you really put a lot into those words. I feel what you mean and am smiling at you now. Good luck in the contest you!!!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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What a sweet little love poem girl. I love it and you really put a lot into those words. I feel what you mean and am smiling at you now. Good luck in the contest you!!!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Thank you, Gungalo!! I wrote this a while ago, so it isn't/wasn't for the contest, but a poem for the hubby! Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from Jawster007
This is so beautiful and well written. Missing another in terms of "heart" and "spirit" covers the spectrum of love. All of this said in so few words. Very well done!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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This is so beautiful and well written. Missing another in terms of "heart" and "spirit" covers the spectrum of love. All of this said in so few words. Very well done!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you! This was a joy to write - it was for my hubby, and we will be together in 18 days!!! Thanks for reading and the generous review~
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
A very good morning to you Poet!
Patti, that was beautiful. It was very witty. I wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed.
I wish you the best your work.
Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving!
Loyd
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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A very good morning to you Poet!
Patti, that was beautiful. It was very witty. I wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed.
I wish you the best your work.
Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving!
Loyd
Comment Written 24-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Loyd. May your holiday be wonderful, too. ~patty~!
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You are welcome and thanks! Loyd
Comment from Shirley B
This is a well writtem poem. It speaks of the lonliness one feels when one is away. It says a lot in such a short poem. great job, Best of luck in the contest, Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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This is a well writtem poem. It speaks of the lonliness one feels when one is away. It says a lot in such a short poem. great job, Best of luck in the contest, Shirley
Comment Written 24-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from Lady Jane
Yes, it is a short, short poem, but it says a LOT! It is heartfelt and spirited. Good verbiage choice and nice presentation. Good luck in the contest, patty...
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Yes, it is a short, short poem, but it says a LOT! It is heartfelt and spirited. Good verbiage choice and nice presentation. Good luck in the contest, patty...
Comment Written 24-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from Mithma
It is written with meaning and you were been able to collect write words to deliver the idea. It is very clever of you because you could express the feeling with such few words.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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It is written with meaning and you were been able to collect write words to deliver the idea. It is very clever of you because you could express the feeling with such few words.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from chrissy8
With such few words used you are able to convey quite a bit about what comes across as a lover. Am I correct? I find myself out of nowhere missing someone I haven't seen in years but wishing I would've said the "right" thing. Your poem shows us we can be together in spirit, not just in flesh. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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With such few words used you are able to convey quite a bit about what comes across as a lover. Am I correct? I find myself out of nowhere missing someone I haven't seen in years but wishing I would've said the "right" thing. Your poem shows us we can be together in spirit, not just in flesh. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Few words but quite a message. Isn't it something that these feelings from loved ones come out of the blue when we are engaged in doing other things? Great feelings and a good message from you.
Dave
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Few words but quite a message. Isn't it something that these feelings from loved ones come out of the blue when we are engaged in doing other things? Great feelings and a good message from you.
Dave
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from Aplgwest
I can picture the missed one being in the military and the narrator wishing to fly to him, if only in spirit. I have a bit of a problem with the image of a heart speaking, even poetically. I could see a soul having much to say, especially with the use of the second line's spirit. For that reason, I feel obliged to give only four stars.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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I can picture the missed one being in the military and the narrator wishing to fly to him, if only in spirit. I have a bit of a problem with the image of a heart speaking, even poetically. I could see a soul having much to say, especially with the use of the second line's spirit. For that reason, I feel obliged to give only four stars.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
Comment from bowls
This certainly qualifies as a short love poem. Only lovers speak to one another with their hearts. Thinking of the lover, the speaker's spirit "flies". A very effective word here suggesting longing for togetherness. The speaker's heart has a message - perhaps it's overflowing with love which cannot be contained. A very expressive poem.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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This certainly qualifies as a short love poem. Only lovers speak to one another with their hearts. Thinking of the lover, the speaker's spirit "flies". A very effective word here suggesting longing for togetherness. The speaker's heart has a message - perhaps it's overflowing with love which cannot be contained. A very expressive poem.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. Missing people has been a way of life for the past 30 years; seems like no matter where I am - in the physical sense - I'm not with everyone I hold dear; and as my loved ones have passed, I've been missing them, too. ~patty~
