Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Chapter 10; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from fictionwriter
It's funny how men never seem to know exactly what a woman wants and when. It seems we're always having to tell them to cuddle, or hold. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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It's funny how men never seem to know exactly what a woman wants and when. It seems we're always having to tell them to cuddle, or hold. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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I just don't think men are in tune with women at all. I know these men I live with sure aren't.
Comment from RKagan
First I want to say that my thoughts and prayers are with you. Once again, please don't worry about your hair. It will come back. I am sure the fatigue is just your body's needing rest to fight this thing. As far as your post, as you know, I always love your writing. It is excellent. God Bless you and keep you strong and healthy.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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First I want to say that my thoughts and prayers are with you. Once again, please don't worry about your hair. It will come back. I am sure the fatigue is just your body's needing rest to fight this thing. As far as your post, as you know, I always love your writing. It is excellent. God Bless you and keep you strong and healthy.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your encouraging words and kind review.
Comment from Realist101
Hi Barbara! Thank you for sharing your story and your life with us. I find no spags in this chapter either...I am always so impressed with your dialogue and get a kick out of the painting...I am messy too...and still not done with my kitchen cabinets. I JUST wished on a falling star or something a few nights ago. I included your full recovery in my wish too. It was a long wish...HUGS! Susan...ps, by long wish I mean I have way too many requests I'm sure! ") But I mean well.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Hi Barbara! Thank you for sharing your story and your life with us. I find no spags in this chapter either...I am always so impressed with your dialogue and get a kick out of the painting...I am messy too...and still not done with my kitchen cabinets. I JUST wished on a falling star or something a few nights ago. I included your full recovery in my wish too. It was a long wish...HUGS! Susan...ps, by long wish I mean I have way too many requests I'm sure! ") But I mean well.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support. It means a lot.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, this is so sweet. The description of Sara's mood and her inner thoughts are so natural for a woman. Btw does Sara really speaks out loud or whispered when you put her thoughts between quotation marks? Either way it's okay with me ... :) I enjoy reading this chapter, and I wish you all the best with the chemo.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Hi, Barbara, this is so sweet. The description of Sara's mood and her inner thoughts are so natural for a woman. Btw does Sara really speaks out loud or whispered when you put her thoughts between quotation marks? Either way it's okay with me ... :) I enjoy reading this chapter, and I wish you all the best with the chemo.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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I wondered how much should be thought myself, but I do have conversations with myself. I will see what others say.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great chapter as usual. You wrote that little spark of jealosy very well. The dialgue is excellent and I am ready for more. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Great chapter as usual. You wrote that little spark of jealosy very well. The dialgue is excellent and I am ready for more. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from R. K. Alan
Loved this chapter. Nice to see the two of them acting like a man and woman in love again.
As for your hair falling out, I could match you up with Bruce Willis if you like, you'd make quite a pair... :) Just remember, as terrible as it may seem, it will grow back and you'll be happy and carefree in no time. God bless. Ray aka Krylon
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Loved this chapter. Nice to see the two of them acting like a man and woman in love again.
As for your hair falling out, I could match you up with Bruce Willis if you like, you'd make quite a pair... :) Just remember, as terrible as it may seem, it will grow back and you'll be happy and carefree in no time. God bless. Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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I know, my 17 year old said, "Mom, hair loss is minor to being dead." He has a point. I would rather be bald than dead. Thank you for your kind review.
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At least he says it like it is. Smart kid. Ray aka krylon
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is very well written and holds the reader's attention. Enjoyable to read. I know about the fatigue-I was in a n accident and have had 12 surgeries for it. I just had to figure our what was most important, what didn't need to be done at all and what I needed others to do to help me. I hired someone to clean my house 2 hours a week. Take it easy-Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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This is very well written and holds the reader's attention. Enjoyable to read. I know about the fatigue-I was in a n accident and have had 12 surgeries for it. I just had to figure our what was most important, what didn't need to be done at all and what I needed others to do to help me. I hired someone to clean my house 2 hours a week. Take it easy-Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. I just need to learn there are worse things than needing to take rest period.
Comment from Rama Rao
Another excellent chapter which made fine reading and kept me engrossed. Joe seeing Sara in Geirge's arms but not getting angry with her defines his strong character and his intense love for her.
However, I didn't understand this bit. "Just because Matt's gentle with Dani, doesn't mean Joe would be gentle with me.
Why did she get such a doubt?
I think you should think of global readership.
Wishing you good health.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Another excellent chapter which made fine reading and kept me engrossed. Joe seeing Sara in Geirge's arms but not getting angry with her defines his strong character and his intense love for her.
However, I didn't understand this bit. "Just because Matt's gentle with Dani, doesn't mean Joe would be gentle with me.
Why did she get such a doubt?
I think you should think of global readership.
Wishing you good health.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Sara has such a low self concept she thinks the worst in every situation, but she is starting to reach out. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the way the story is going. It is proceeding at a slow pace that is the way life should be. I think that the gift you have for working love with tension is great.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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I like the way the story is going. It is proceeding at a slow pace that is the way life should be. I think that the gift you have for working love with tension is great.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind relationship.
Comment from KayteeF
I am so glad to read this chapter, the building of the relationship as the mystery develops. You are keeping up the tension, but as much as she is a bit scared about Joe's power meaning he might use it on her and Cassie, her underlying need for his comfort is described so well.
You probably know already but I, among your many friends in Fanstory, have been thinking about you and sending out some prayers for you and your family. You just need to take things easy, not get too stressed out, and be gentle with yourself. No trying too hard. Just take one day at a time.
Regards and good vibes are sent your way.
Cathleen
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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I am so glad to read this chapter, the building of the relationship as the mystery develops. You are keeping up the tension, but as much as she is a bit scared about Joe's power meaning he might use it on her and Cassie, her underlying need for his comfort is described so well.
You probably know already but I, among your many friends in Fanstory, have been thinking about you and sending out some prayers for you and your family. You just need to take things easy, not get too stressed out, and be gentle with yourself. No trying too hard. Just take one day at a time.
Regards and good vibes are sent your way.
Cathleen
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your continued prayers. I definitely need them. I appreciate the kind review.
