Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Chapter 10; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
I feel so sorry for Sara not knowing whether Joe would be abusive.
"Cassie's always top priority with her. I'm just trying to keep her busy.["]
"Not nearly as childish as slugging me on the arm[] because you wanted to be held.
Roberta
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2010
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I feel so sorry for Sara not knowing whether Joe would be abusive.
"Cassie's always top priority with her. I'm just trying to keep her busy.["]
"Not nearly as childish as slugging me on the arm[] because you wanted to be held.
Roberta
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and kind support.
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent. This is the first time your book has appeared for me to read and all I can say is I'm captivated. Your writing is so easy to read and the story is, at least on this, my first view of it, so clear and understandable. Not sure how I'll feel about it if it's a mystery because I don't usually like a mystery. I'm referring to personal reading of mystery's, not reviewing them. Maybe you'll sell me on that too.:) A very good written work.
I will remember you and any health issues you are having in my prayers. Stay strong and believe in a God who loves you and will hold you in the palm of His hand.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Excellent. This is the first time your book has appeared for me to read and all I can say is I'm captivated. Your writing is so easy to read and the story is, at least on this, my first view of it, so clear and understandable. Not sure how I'll feel about it if it's a mystery because I don't usually like a mystery. I'm referring to personal reading of mystery's, not reviewing them. Maybe you'll sell me on that too.:) A very good written work.
I will remember you and any health issues you are having in my prayers. Stay strong and believe in a God who loves you and will hold you in the palm of His hand.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Not to worry, this is a real romance. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Sacred Heart
Barbara,
First, after having read your notes, I just want to say
what a inspiration you are to us all and it does my heart good to know that you realize you need to pace yourself.
What you are going through will naturally take it's tole on your energy level, spiritually mentally emotionally and physically. Our prayers love and support are with you.....
Your hair will grow back...and when it does it will be a symbol of strenth to you which will mean so much to you everytime you look in the mirror. Hugs my friend. Take good care and REST!!
This is another great chapter and I truly enjoyed it!!
Blessings Love Patty
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Barbara,
First, after having read your notes, I just want to say
what a inspiration you are to us all and it does my heart good to know that you realize you need to pace yourself.
What you are going through will naturally take it's tole on your energy level, spiritually mentally emotionally and physically. Our prayers love and support are with you.....
Your hair will grow back...and when it does it will be a symbol of strenth to you which will mean so much to you everytime you look in the mirror. Hugs my friend. Take good care and REST!!
This is another great chapter and I truly enjoyed it!!
Blessings Love Patty
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your encouraging words and kind review. I appreciate both.
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Take care sweet!
Comment from bob cullen
Whenever I want a good read I look for your writing. The characters are well drawn, their dialogue is always neat and tidy and fits the moment.
And finally the story always draws the reader in. As always a damn good read
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Whenever I want a good read I look for your writing. The characters are well drawn, their dialogue is always neat and tidy and fits the moment.
And finally the story always draws the reader in. As always a damn good read
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Lekatt
This one of the best stories I have read, it is solid and descriptive as if I am in the room. I love this and think it is part of a great book.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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This one of the best stories I have read, it is solid and descriptive as if I am in the room. I love this and think it is part of a great book.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
Your fatigue is obviously not interfering
with the quality of your writing. I'm not
surprised Sara reached out to Joe for
comfort. He has been her rock through this
nightmare. I hope things work out well for
them.
You are an inspiration to so many as you
share your walk through treatment. I continue
to pray for you. My best to you always.
Love,
jan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Barbara:
Your fatigue is obviously not interfering
with the quality of your writing. I'm not
surprised Sara reached out to Joe for
comfort. He has been her rock through this
nightmare. I hope things work out well for
them.
You are an inspiration to so many as you
share your walk through treatment. I continue
to pray for you. My best to you always.
Love,
jan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from bookishfabler
This was a nother great chapter. I sit here and read every word. I think the first paragraph a bit choppy. here.
When Joe opened the front door, he didn't see Sara or George. They must be painting another room. Joe walked into the bedroom and saw Sara in George's arms. His eyes met George's, as she stepped back.
He waltzed into the bedroom to find Sara in George's arms. As she stepped back, he glared at George.
Something more precise, I guess.
other than that, everything else was great.
feel better, kiddo.
love ya
book
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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This was a nother great chapter. I sit here and read every word. I think the first paragraph a bit choppy. here.
When Joe opened the front door, he didn't see Sara or George. They must be painting another room. Joe walked into the bedroom and saw Sara in George's arms. His eyes met George's, as she stepped back.
He waltzed into the bedroom to find Sara in George's arms. As she stepped back, he glared at George.
Something more precise, I guess.
other than that, everything else was great.
feel better, kiddo.
love ya
book
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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I like your way better, I will make the changes. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Chapter twenty-four is extremely well written. Your dialogue is natural with excellent descriptive writing and great narrative. I felt Sara's frustration. I just hope Cassie isn't being molested or worse by these creeps who have her captive. Joe walks into the house of find George comforting Sara. He thanks George for keeping Sara's mind off the terrible situation. From Joe's internal thoughts we realize that he's a bit insecure about his relationship with Sara. The poor woman is making herself so miserable looking at the photo album of her daughter. Sara is having doubts again. I want to shake her because Joe is a sweet man. I liked how she worked herself up into a tizzy and walked out of her bedroom to slug Joe in the arm where he's laying on the couch. It's sweet that Joe held her and didn't get mad. You did a terrific job on chapter twenty-four, my friend. I look forward to your next chapter. I pray and hope you're feeling better and kicking some major cancer butt. Have you lost all your hair yet? Remember bald is beautiful. With love and prayers. . .Melissa!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Barbara,
Chapter twenty-four is extremely well written. Your dialogue is natural with excellent descriptive writing and great narrative. I felt Sara's frustration. I just hope Cassie isn't being molested or worse by these creeps who have her captive. Joe walks into the house of find George comforting Sara. He thanks George for keeping Sara's mind off the terrible situation. From Joe's internal thoughts we realize that he's a bit insecure about his relationship with Sara. The poor woman is making herself so miserable looking at the photo album of her daughter. Sara is having doubts again. I want to shake her because Joe is a sweet man. I liked how she worked herself up into a tizzy and walked out of her bedroom to slug Joe in the arm where he's laying on the couch. It's sweet that Joe held her and didn't get mad. You did a terrific job on chapter twenty-four, my friend. I look forward to your next chapter. I pray and hope you're feeling better and kicking some major cancer butt. Have you lost all your hair yet? Remember bald is beautiful. With love and prayers. . .Melissa!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Most of my hair is gone, there's a few stubborns hold outs. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, i loved the part where she slugged him in the arm cause he wasn't awake to hold her. i like that you're putting their romance together so slowly and giving us a few details about Cassie as well. i pray your strength will improve.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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this is very well written, i loved the part where she slugged him in the arm cause he wasn't awake to hold her. i like that you're putting their romance together so slowly and giving us a few details about Cassie as well. i pray your strength will improve.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from cacfilly
So sorry that you are going thru what you are, but hoping that positive thoughts will help get you thru it. I really enjoyed this chapter as Joe and Sara's relationship develops. I need to read back a little more later to find out more about the characters, but this section flowed well, was filled with the emotion the characters were feeling, even the jealousy. Nice job and God Bless.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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So sorry that you are going thru what you are, but hoping that positive thoughts will help get you thru it. I really enjoyed this chapter as Joe and Sara's relationship develops. I need to read back a little more later to find out more about the characters, but this section flowed well, was filled with the emotion the characters were feeling, even the jealousy. Nice job and God Bless.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
