My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Self Aware"a collection of my poetry
3 total reviews
Comment from P. G. Simpkins
Hello there and what a cool name you have! I thought I would check you out, and this is a very artistic unique poem, anything to do with art grabs my attention. I love the way you absorb the pieces of art that you describe and try to feel how they were created, the last two lines are excellent, looking through the lens of my camera, my self that wants to look back! : )
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Hello there and what a cool name you have! I thought I would check you out, and this is a very artistic unique poem, anything to do with art grabs my attention. I love the way you absorb the pieces of art that you describe and try to feel how they were created, the last two lines are excellent, looking through the lens of my camera, my self that wants to look back! : )
Comment Written 08-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Hi; THANK YOU so much for your kind review, and for taking the time to check out my writing - as for the name, it is an adaption of "Mustang Sally," and a co-worker started calling me that a few years back, and it has stuck as my pen name. Your review made me feel very good, and I'm glad you appreciate my thoughts and words.
Comment from Tushy
I really enjoyed this poem, it is very interesting and original. I love that you have made the reader think about art as well as poetry. Your words have a nice flow to them, and I felt that you transported me to a lovely art gallery through your words. An intelligent and well-written piece of work.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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I really enjoyed this poem, it is very interesting and original. I love that you have made the reader think about art as well as poetry. Your words have a nice flow to them, and I felt that you transported me to a lovely art gallery through your words. An intelligent and well-written piece of work.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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Thank you for the lovely review. I hadn't thought of how it tied artwork and poetry, . . .just was expressing how art museums make me feel. I appreciate your review tremendously.
Comment from CodyJack
I'm in my early thirties and I already can look back at the teenage boy and see how much I see things so differently. Getting an insight to yourself is hard sometimes but it comes. Great imagery. Cody
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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I'm in my early thirties and I already can look back at the teenage boy and see how much I see things so differently. Getting an insight to yourself is hard sometimes but it comes. Great imagery. Cody
Comment Written 03-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked the imagery - I haven't written in awhile, so this felt clumsy - glad you enjoyed it.
