Old Blackwater
What lurks??24 total reviews
Comment from jack silver
My goodness a true horror story!!!!! I absolutely loved every moment of it!!!! Really look forward to reading more. You have my vote on this one!!!! loved it. truly amazing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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My goodness a true horror story!!!!! I absolutely loved every moment of it!!!! Really look forward to reading more. You have my vote on this one!!!! loved it. truly amazing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Hi Jack!! I am thrilled to hear from you! Have you posted lately? I have not seen your work in my box! But thank you for this sixer!! WOW and heartfelt thanks. I had fun, and worked hard on this, so your enthusiasm means a great deal to me. I heart you! ") Susan
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Had earthquake. Home no longer able to be lived in. daughter is in hospital. Moved closer to be there for her 24 7. Slowly rebuilding. Taking one day at a time
Comment from CodyJack
Great suspense here and holds you from beginning to end of the story. I liked reading this and the ending leaves me hanging. I will have to read more of this. Great imagery and good luck with the book. Cody
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Great suspense here and holds you from beginning to end of the story. I liked reading this and the ending leaves me hanging. I will have to read more of this. Great imagery and good luck with the book. Cody
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Hi Cody! BOOK?? Now, I had them shredded with this monster! ") I guess they could survive, but it would be a miracle! ") Thank you with all my heart for this great and encouraging review!! Oh oh, how I appreciate!! Hugs to you and yours Cody!! Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Hi another excellent story I like your script it's interesting and it held my attention to the finish. The imagery and the flow are well expressed in your description of the story . A good write,I enjoyed reading your story.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Hi another excellent story I like your script it's interesting and it held my attention to the finish. The imagery and the flow are well expressed in your description of the story . A good write,I enjoyed reading your story.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Good morning Mary! THANK YOU VERY MUCH, for reading this story. I worked really hard on it, so, your time for me is extra meaningful. I am happy you went ahead even with a bit of death and a curse word. Life is not always a bowl of cherries as they say! ") Thank you for being brave! I so much appreciate! Smiles, Susan
Comment from marcii
You can sure write a good story. I did get a bit lost but I think that was me not your story.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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You can sure write a good story. I did get a bit lost but I think that was me not your story.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Dear Marcii, I want to express how much I appreciate you reading this. I really worked on it, and it is a bit long, but you are the only one to read it so far who took the time to review it too. If you think it needs some work, please let me know what you think? It would mean a lot to me. Thank you again...Sincerely, susan
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I loved it when you said he chewed up and spat out the little dog, awful as it was.
I kind of got a bit loss about the curse, thats about it.. they paid in full with the lives poor dears, hehehe
