The Rape
Dark Sonnet - after reading William Butler Yeats153 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
My word, Gungalo! What a poignant and emotionally charged piece. This exudes frailty and reality. It merges the truth with the obvious, it does happen and it is real. What a breathtaking write. Not the idea or premise, but the way you capture the spirit of "the RAPE." You are one talented writer and I am honored to have read and reviewed this well penned, realistically written, piece of insight! Just an all around devoted penning. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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My word, Gungalo! What a poignant and emotionally charged piece. This exudes frailty and reality. It merges the truth with the obvious, it does happen and it is real. What a breathtaking write. Not the idea or premise, but the way you capture the spirit of "the RAPE." You are one talented writer and I am honored to have read and reviewed this well penned, realistically written, piece of insight! Just an all around devoted penning. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2010
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Thank you, JaCherie, so very much. You've made my day. Love that you like this one and your compliments have humbled me. Sighhhh ...
Comment from mermaids
This just gave me the chills. You created a clear scene of rape and the horror of it. You did well with this form and
congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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This just gave me the chills. You created a clear scene of rape and the horror of it. You did well with this form and
congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thank you so very much, Mermaids. I'm still recovering from the shock of being nominated and then winning. Breathing deep for I wanted it realistic to show the heinousness of this crime.
Comment from Stephen C Winter (Vs
Dear Gungalo
I commend you for tackling such a brave subject, many wish to close their eyes too. this is well written, it keeps the reader engage with its good flow, while giving food for thought.
Kind regards
Steve
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Dear Gungalo
I commend you for tackling such a brave subject, many wish to close their eyes too. this is well written, it keeps the reader engage with its good flow, while giving food for thought.
Kind regards
Steve
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks so very much Steve!!! It's true and yet we can't turn our heads from it.
Comment from BLACKDYKE
A Monthly winner and rightly so Gungalo. This shows so much insight that I worry.
It paints a picture which is indelibly carved into the soul of every man. Well written and rending. Eric
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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A Monthly winner and rightly so Gungalo. This shows so much insight that I worry.
It paints a picture which is indelibly carved into the soul of every man. Well written and rending. Eric
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks Eric. It's a heinous crime and folks do need to be aware.
Comment from leesm
Hi G. CONGRATULATIONS on winning the poem of the month contest!!
This is a horrible story well told in a very well written sonnet. The iambic pentameter is flawless and flows well. The rhymes too are exceptionally well done, including the final couplet. KUDOS!!
-Lee
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Hi G. CONGRATULATIONS on winning the poem of the month contest!!
This is a horrible story well told in a very well written sonnet. The iambic pentameter is flawless and flows well. The rhymes too are exceptionally well done, including the final couplet. KUDOS!!
-Lee
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks so very much Lee. A big surprise to me!!!
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Hello Gungalo, Wow what a powerful poem which tells the story of rape, just as it should! An act of violence against a woman. The words you chose create a horribly true and vivid scene for the reader. The picture and colors enhance your exceptionally written poem. Congratulations on winning Poem of the Month. Just an awesome write!
All my best,
Warren
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Hello Gungalo, Wow what a powerful poem which tells the story of rape, just as it should! An act of violence against a woman. The words you chose create a horribly true and vivid scene for the reader. The picture and colors enhance your exceptionally written poem. Congratulations on winning Poem of the Month. Just an awesome write!
All my best,
Warren
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much, Warren. Color me surprised all the way around for that contest. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Mukul Nandi
I read the rape story of an innocent girl. Reading the story i really felt very sad. This kind of deed is really heinous and should not be avoided at all. I think such kind of deed can not be stopped by punishing the criminal. I think only parents can do something and they should always give their sons good lesson and tell them to keep away from any kind of bad work.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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I read the rape story of an innocent girl. Reading the story i really felt very sad. This kind of deed is really heinous and should not be avoided at all. I think such kind of deed can not be stopped by punishing the criminal. I think only parents can do something and they should always give their sons good lesson and tell them to keep away from any kind of bad work.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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I agree Mukul!!! Thank you for an awesome review!!!
Comment from johnray
A well written and concise account of a very hurtful event. The rhyme in the poem feels natural and the overall rhythm of the poem reads quite well also. It ends well too, with the double meaning of her innocence.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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A well written and concise account of a very hurtful event. The rhyme in the poem feels natural and the overall rhythm of the poem reads quite well also. It ends well too, with the double meaning of her innocence.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thank you so very much!!!
Comment from Penpal
I find it amazing how a rhyming poem can work so well with such harsh reality. Very well written, the imagery brings the reader right into the scene, and as horrific as it is, the words flow smooth. When a reader can feel the horrors as though she were a part of the whole scene, now that's writing.
Congrats to this well deserved win.
Pen
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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I find it amazing how a rhyming poem can work so well with such harsh reality. Very well written, the imagery brings the reader right into the scene, and as horrific as it is, the words flow smooth. When a reader can feel the horrors as though she were a part of the whole scene, now that's writing.
Congrats to this well deserved win.
Pen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much, Pen!!!!
Comment from Mastery
Congratulations, Pam..On your win. I can see why. This ism very powerful and full of great imagery. Goes to show what a talented poet can do, eh? Good job...Bob
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Congratulations, Pam..On your win. I can see why. This ism very powerful and full of great imagery. Goes to show what a talented poet can do, eh? Good job...Bob
Comment Written 26-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2010
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Thanks so very much, Bob. MUAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
