The Rape
Dark Sonnet - after reading William Butler Yeats153 total reviews
Comment from shadowcast
The description of the scene is awesome, yet not offending, that's what I like about this poem. It was not crude nor vulgar, just a description of the victim's emotions. Very well written.
WgS
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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The description of the scene is awesome, yet not offending, that's what I like about this poem. It was not crude nor vulgar, just a description of the victim's emotions. Very well written.
WgS
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you poet. Wanted that to show and to make folks aware. They should be anyway, don't cha think?
Comment from Kevin Jalmax
Haunting. This is wonderful and chilling. The line "her innocence upon a dark street lies" ties things up in this stark and beautiful poem. I can completely understand why it won poem of the month. I'm very interested to read more of your stuff.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Haunting. This is wonderful and chilling. The line "her innocence upon a dark street lies" ties things up in this stark and beautiful poem. I can completely understand why it won poem of the month. I'm very interested to read more of your stuff.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much Kevin. I appreciate your review. Welcome to this site and enjoy!!!!!
Comment from parisaboyd
If I had 6 stars you would have recieved it! Congrats G You know I am a fan! There is so much depth in all that you write. Couldn/t think of anyone more deserving! Luv ya Paris
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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If I had 6 stars you would have recieved it! Congrats G You know I am a fan! There is so much depth in all that you write. Couldn/t think of anyone more deserving! Luv ya Paris
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thanks Paris, this surprised me for sure. It's a hard write but it happens so much. Your review is most appreciated!!!!!
Comment from Fritz-Lorenz
A needed exposure of a horrid invasion of privacy, that often due to shame, is not brought to light. So well written G.
Force and violence should never be tolerated by society. Nor
encouraged by wars or revenge attempt. Great job of writing,
and congrats on your nomination of Poem of the Month.
Fritz-Lorenz
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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A needed exposure of a horrid invasion of privacy, that often due to shame, is not brought to light. So well written G.
Force and violence should never be tolerated by society. Nor
encouraged by wars or revenge attempt. Great job of writing,
and congrats on your nomination of Poem of the Month.
Fritz-Lorenz
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much Fritz. Surprised the heck outta me.
Comment from denise.edge
This an amazing poem, but so sad and honest. Through your word, I could feel the sorrow and defeat of the victim. Thank you so much for sharing. Your certainly deserve the poem of the month award.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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This an amazing poem, but so sad and honest. Through your word, I could feel the sorrow and defeat of the victim. Thank you so much for sharing. Your certainly deserve the poem of the month award.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2010
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Thank you, Denise. It was not expected for sure.
Comment from whitteron
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This is an intense and disturbing look at violation. I had thought of broaching this subject, but didn't know if I could go to that dark place. You have do so, delicately with the precision of a surgeon.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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This is an intense and disturbing look at violation. I had thought of broaching this subject, but didn't know if I could go to that dark place. You have do so, delicately with the precision of a surgeon.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much, poet!!! It needs to be heard. Your words here are wonderful and reinforce my decision to write it.
Comment from chrissy8
This has to be one of your absolute best. WOW. I think you hit a note with women who are victims of rape. It gave me chills. You need, like, seven stars for this poem. Just AWESOME. LOVE IT!!!!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This has to be one of your absolute best. WOW. I think you hit a note with women who are victims of rape. It gave me chills. You need, like, seven stars for this poem. Just AWESOME. LOVE IT!!!!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you girl. I was very surprised that this one was nominated and then won. Your review is awesome.
Comment from SeasonSky
That is outstanding! I could not imagine a more deserving winner than that poem. Its no surprise that it won poem of the month! Truly amazing.
-sky
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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That is outstanding! I could not imagine a more deserving winner than that poem. Its no surprise that it won poem of the month! Truly amazing.
-sky
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much, Sky. It came as a total surprise to me that it had been nominated. Your words are so appreciated!!!
Comment from Spirit1
Very clear why you have received poem of the month. Haunting really and the picture made me shutter. I noticed in many of your poems you use "..." Do you want the reader to do a super pause when we seem them? And by the way, I'd like to know if you ever sleep. I can't believe how much you write!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Very clear why you have received poem of the month. Haunting really and the picture made me shutter. I noticed in many of your poems you use "..." Do you want the reader to do a super pause when we seem them? And by the way, I'd like to know if you ever sleep. I can't believe how much you write!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Yes, super pause. LOL and thanks you for a great review. I write two a day here and post but writing comes easy to me. They dont take long.!!!!!
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
Oh, so dark, yet brilliantly composed! Yes, reminiscent of Yeats indeed! Brava!
So, as an side, please do tell me what "contumaciously" means, will you? (oh, that was another poem...)
Wonderful work from you, my Goddess Pamelia, but what else would I expect from you?
xoxox,
Seraph~
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Oh, so dark, yet brilliantly composed! Yes, reminiscent of Yeats indeed! Brava!
So, as an side, please do tell me what "contumaciously" means, will you? (oh, that was another poem...)
Wonderful work from you, my Goddess Pamelia, but what else would I expect from you?
xoxox,
Seraph~
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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It means stubbornly disobedient, wilfully obstinate or rebellious!!! LOL, yes it was another write. Thanks you for a great review here. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. And I'm no goddess either you. LOL. (smiling at you)
