The Rape
Dark Sonnet - after reading William Butler Yeats153 total reviews
Comment from ImJLAD
This is a powerfully sad poem.
As far as structure goes, great job telling the very sad story.
This does happen everyday, and it's far beyond unsettling.
Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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This is a powerfully sad poem.
As far as structure goes, great job telling the very sad story.
This does happen everyday, and it's far beyond unsettling.
Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you so very much ImJLAD. Your words are equally as powerful!!!
Comment from annie-angel
wow! very powerful, very violent, full of lost innocence. I could cry for all women/girls who have suffered through something like this. The poem brings the emotion of rape to life. Excellent. annie
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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wow! very powerful, very violent, full of lost innocence. I could cry for all women/girls who have suffered through something like this. The poem brings the emotion of rape to life. Excellent. annie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thanks Annie, me too. After reading Yeats The Swan I had to write this one just to get the subject out there and in support of all who have suffored such horrid experiences.
Comment from RKagan
Oh my, this is a heartbreaking piece of writing. It is very well written, however. I thought it flowed smoothly and told the story beautifully. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Oh my, this is a heartbreaking piece of writing. It is very well written, however. I thought it flowed smoothly and told the story beautifully. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thanks you for a great review of this one.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi gungalo. Yes sadly this does happen everyday and you have described the horrific experience very well in sonnet style. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Hi gungalo. Yes sadly this does happen everyday and you have described the horrific experience very well in sonnet style. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thanks so much for your awesome review!!!!!
Comment from Harlequin
Wooow. You have written a fantastic poem! : )
Its images are strong and vivid, its 'story' is contemporary and hard to write about it -especially in a poem,- well...so, well done! : )
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Wooow. You have written a fantastic poem! : )
Its images are strong and vivid, its 'story' is contemporary and hard to write about it -especially in a poem,- well...so, well done! : )
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thank you so very much poet. Harder to live with for all those who have experienced it. Sigh ...
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Agreed. : ( Sigh. I'm glad you liked my review. : )
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Thanks you. I truly did and I do appreciate it very much!!!
Comment from Maxine Kendall
Your poem is incredibly powerful in its portrayal of such a terrible act. You tell it like it is... vicious and soul destroying.
Really well presented too.
Well done and good luck.
Maxine x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Your poem is incredibly powerful in its portrayal of such a terrible act. You tell it like it is... vicious and soul destroying.
Really well presented too.
Well done and good luck.
Maxine x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thank you so very much for your review of this one!!!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written and image packed poem about one of the worst violent crimes. It show the emotional and physical pain of the victim and the illness in the perpetrator.
Keep writing.
Good luck
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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This is a well written and image packed poem about one of the worst violent crimes. It show the emotional and physical pain of the victim and the illness in the perpetrator.
Keep writing.
Good luck
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Thank you, Dragonpoet for a great review and understanding of this hideous crime.
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from MizKat
Gungalo - Your sad, but true poem is written well. The words you wrote were drenched with emotion. It's hard to say I enjoyed it because of what the topic is, still I did. You wrote a magnificent poetic story. Kat
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Gungalo - Your sad, but true poem is written well. The words you wrote were drenched with emotion. It's hard to say I enjoyed it because of what the topic is, still I did. You wrote a magnificent poetic story. Kat
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Thanks Kat. I wrote for all those who cannot and to help their plght. I can't imagine being raped and having to live with it. Your review is wonderful.
Comment from J.L. Balani
An exceptionally well written poem about rape. You took a difficult topic and described the story so clearly with an excellent flow to the words. Frightening how often this happens. Very well done as always!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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An exceptionally well written poem about rape. You took a difficult topic and described the story so clearly with an excellent flow to the words. Frightening how often this happens. Very well done as always!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Thank you. It made the poem of the month contest, girl. I'm so surprised. Sigh!!!
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I'm not surprised at all, it's excellent! Congratulations!
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Thank you, well I surely was. Didn't expect that at all. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Ovidd
Well written sonnet! The iambic pentameter was maintained and the rhyming worked well. The material is definitely one of dark matter.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Well written sonnet! The iambic pentameter was maintained and the rhyming worked well. The material is definitely one of dark matter.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Thank you and yes it is. Not my usual sonnet but it seemed to call to be written.
