Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Chapter 7, part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from mmmichelle34
That was a very nice peace of work to sit and read you have a way of writing that keeps the reader interested. just to let you know i love your writing :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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That was a very nice peace of work to sit and read you have a way of writing that keeps the reader interested. just to let you know i love your writing :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from afternoonlight
Your writing is grand as ususal. Discription, scene setting. I'm just disappointed with the events in the story in this part. I would be sedated or screaming if my child was this missing...I would not be talking about guns and killing ability I don't know it just lost it's reality for me. Hopefully it will come back around and I can be rescued.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Your writing is grand as ususal. Discription, scene setting. I'm just disappointed with the events in the story in this part. I would be sedated or screaming if my child was this missing...I would not be talking about guns and killing ability I don't know it just lost it's reality for me. Hopefully it will come back around and I can be rescued.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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I think the next chapter will put things in perspective. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from K. L. Bauman
Another wonderful chapter. (Sorry to hear about your computer problems!) Your characters are very easy to love. Can't wait to see how things develop.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Another wonderful chapter. (Sorry to hear about your computer problems!) Your characters are very easy to love. Can't wait to see how things develop.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Wow. It is no wonder you have your rank. Your dialog is really great and realistic and it brings your characters to life. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Wow. It is no wonder you have your rank. Your dialog is really great and realistic and it brings your characters to life. Great chapter.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from pickthorn
I am enjoying the story. I'm wondering where Cassie is. I know you told me I would have to wait awhile, but still wondering. :o) I like the relationship that is developing between Joe and Sara. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I hope things go well for you with your 1st chemo treatment in a couple of weeks. Thanks for keeping us posted.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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I am enjoying the story. I'm wondering where Cassie is. I know you told me I would have to wait awhile, but still wondering. :o) I like the relationship that is developing between Joe and Sara. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I hope things go well for you with your 1st chemo treatment in a couple of weeks. Thanks for keeping us posted.
pickthorn
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CKLA
I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope Sara realized what a good man Joe is. The story line is moving along at a good pace.
Collette
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope Sara realized what a good man Joe is. The story line is moving along at a good pace.
Collette
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from zoocq
Keep up the good work...both in writing and in the battle waged against cancer. You are a hero in my book! Affectionately, as always...Sue
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Keep up the good work...both in writing and in the battle waged against cancer. You are a hero in my book! Affectionately, as always...Sue
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review an continued support. If you knew how much of a space cadet I was you probably change your mind. There's a reason I teach first grade and not an older group. My little ones like crazy.
Comment from essence56
I am really enjoying this novel and cannot wait for the outcome. I like how other characters from other chapter novels are incorporated in this as if everyone knows each other. I missed one of the chapters somewhere because I did not know Cassie was missing. Now I am sadden and hurt for Sara as a mom. Please take care of yourself and bless you Barb.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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I am really enjoying this novel and cannot wait for the outcome. I like how other characters from other chapter novels are incorporated in this as if everyone knows each other. I missed one of the chapters somewhere because I did not know Cassie was missing. Now I am sadden and hurt for Sara as a mom. Please take care of yourself and bless you Barb.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank for your kind review. I am sorry you missed a chapter.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Your ability with creating good dialogue is well in evidence here. That's what makes the piece so attractive to me, I particularly like Sarah, she is a strong character.
Good choice of artwork, I liked it too! Take good care of your self, I keep prying for your recovery...
God bless you!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Your ability with creating good dialogue is well in evidence here. That's what makes the piece so attractive to me, I particularly like Sarah, she is a strong character.
Good choice of artwork, I liked it too! Take good care of your self, I keep prying for your recovery...
God bless you!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your prayers
Comment from ladybird
I haven't read any chapters of this for a while, but this, as usual is good.
The characters are still true to form and the story seems to have progressed along nicely. So, Joe has killed someone, the person responsible for raping Sara.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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I haven't read any chapters of this for a while, but this, as usual is good.
The characters are still true to form and the story seems to have progressed along nicely. So, Joe has killed someone, the person responsible for raping Sara.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Joe did not kill anyone, yet. Thank you for you kind review.
