Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Readywriter52
Cassie is still missing, but the reader knows whom her father is. He is Roy, city police chief. Joe has brought Dani in to help him find Cassie. This is an exciting chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Cassie is still missing, but the reader knows whom her father is. He is Roy, city police chief. Joe has brought Dani in to help him find Cassie. This is an exciting chapter.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Barb, sorry to have missed some of your chapters. Will try to check them. Looks like we have a tricky situation here where Cassie has been missing. It's nice to meet Matt and Dani again. Hope she'll be able to find the required info.
Also glad to know about your health situation getting better. Please take care.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hi Barb, sorry to have missed some of your chapters. Will try to check them. Looks like we have a tricky situation here where Cassie has been missing. It's nice to meet Matt and Dani again. Hope she'll be able to find the required info.
Also glad to know about your health situation getting better. Please take care.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I am always glad to hear from you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ted T
Hi Barbara :)
except for Sara still chewing on her lower lip, not a bad chapter.
Lots of action and good dialogue exchanges.
You're making Joe a super-hero, but that's the romance formula.
Ted
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara :)
except for Sara still chewing on her lower lip, not a bad chapter.
Lots of action and good dialogue exchanges.
You're making Joe a super-hero, but that's the romance formula.
Ted
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I have only used it once in over three chapters. As soon as I inserted it, I knew you would say something. I somehow felt it would fit here. That's what I would do. Thank you for your kind review. Joe's temper is going to cause issues.
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Hi Barbara :)
I hope you're feeling better.
Actually, I haven't perceived Joe as having a temper.
Ted
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, this was an interesting mix of violence, love, suspence and action in one short chapter. I hope that Dani is right about Joe, which I feel she is. I hope they find Cassie and that all is well, but I have a feeling more suspence and action is yet to come.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Barbara, this was an interesting mix of violence, love, suspence and action in one short chapter. I hope that Dani is right about Joe, which I feel she is. I hope they find Cassie and that all is well, but I have a feeling more suspence and action is yet to come.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Yes, there is more suspence and I hope some humor. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, this is an interesting chapter where I meet Matt and Dani again. You also do justice to the rapist. You've describes Sara as a sensitive woman who fears Joe is capable to do something harsh to her as well in the future. (I'm so glad to hear about your health progress. Keep us informed...)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hi, Barbara, this is an interesting chapter where I meet Matt and Dani again. You also do justice to the rapist. You've describes Sara as a sensitive woman who fears Joe is capable to do something harsh to her as well in the future. (I'm so glad to hear about your health progress. Keep us informed...)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your continued support. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from bowls
So glad to hear your good news. Good luck with your treatments.
The story continues to be fascinating. We get a really different view of Joe here, but you assure the reader through Dani that he's still the great guy we thought he was. The suspense about what's happened to Cassie is growing. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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So glad to hear your good news. Good luck with your treatments.
The story continues to be fascinating. We get a really different view of Joe here, but you assure the reader through Dani that he's still the great guy we thought he was. The suspense about what's happened to Cassie is growing. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great chapter, just did not give me enough to read. You always do such a good job and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Great chapter, just did not give me enough to read. You always do such a good job and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I almost posted my next section with this one, but it would have been about 2400 words. I was worried about it being too long.
Comment from Nanashirley
This is another good chapter. I feel that anyone who reads this would feel a part of the story as if it were true. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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This is another good chapter. I feel that anyone who reads this would feel a part of the story as if it were true. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from R. K. Alan
First things first, that's good news on the medical front. May God continue to care for you and yours.
Loved the new chapter and advancement to the story. Glad to see Roy get his belated beating. Waiting on the computer and the white SUV news...
Ray aka Krylon
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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First things first, that's good news on the medical front. May God continue to care for you and yours.
Loved the new chapter and advancement to the story. Glad to see Roy get his belated beating. Waiting on the computer and the white SUV news...
Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Meshe Nair
Great chapter. Somehow I wish Roy was killed, but would do no good anyways. Good to hear about you health. Our prayers are with you.
Looking forward to the next one.
Meshe Nair
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Great chapter. Somehow I wish Roy was killed, but would do no good anyways. Good to hear about you health. Our prayers are with you.
Looking forward to the next one.
Meshe Nair
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your prayers. I know they helped.
