Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Chapter 6 part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from lucyanne1977
A good story so far. The characters are believable and the wording and flow of the piece is good. It was easy to read and there was nothing i didn't like about it.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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A good story so far. The characters are believable and the wording and flow of the piece is good. It was easy to read and there was nothing i didn't like about it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Nice winding up of the last chapters action and a good hook to end this one. Now what could you have in mind for Cassie? No doubt the evil bleep who fathered her playing some dangeroius game - for him that is.
Good luck with the surgery.
Patrick
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara,
Nice winding up of the last chapters action and a good hook to end this one. Now what could you have in mind for Cassie? No doubt the evil bleep who fathered her playing some dangeroius game - for him that is.
Good luck with the surgery.
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your review and continued support. I appreciate both.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A great, romantic scene
in this chapter, Barbara --
and now we are wondering what's
happened to Cassie..
A real pleasure to read.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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A great, romantic scene
in this chapter, Barbara --
and now we are wondering what's
happened to Cassie..
A real pleasure to read.
Margaret.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from marcellawachtel
Very intriguing chapter. As things are heating up between them something sinister hovers in the background, and you have brought us to that point very skillfully. Anxiouslty awaitingthe next chapter.
I hope you ace this next surgery, and bounce back soon. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Very intriguing chapter. As things are heating up between them something sinister hovers in the background, and you have brought us to that point very skillfully. Anxiouslty awaitingthe next chapter.
I hope you ace this next surgery, and bounce back soon. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
I totally love that you left this in a bad place. It makes the reader really want more. I know, it's what I love to do too. I hope your surgery goes very well and you're yourself again soon. God bless you.
After he kissed her, he teased, "Between you and Cassie, I need after the comma wouldn't between be small?)
Oh, did I mention I love your book even though it's not my fav genre. Now, that's a compliment
hugs book
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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I totally love that you left this in a bad place. It makes the reader really want more. I know, it's what I love to do too. I hope your surgery goes very well and you're yourself again soon. God bless you.
After he kissed her, he teased, "Between you and Cassie, I need after the comma wouldn't between be small?)
Oh, did I mention I love your book even though it's not my fav genre. Now, that's a compliment
hugs book
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I have some sinister stuff going on for a while. I hope it'll keep your attention.
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Oh darling, if I wasn't already interested, I wouldn't be here. I love your book. I loved the last one too.You write so well. I look forward to your nextchapters. You have a way of bringing characters to life.
Comment from Connie P
Yes, you're leaving us in suspense, but rest assured I'll be patiently waiting. If Sara continues to struggle accepting Joe's love it could become a source of conflict. What in the heck has happened to Casie?
Connie
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Yes, you're leaving us in suspense, but rest assured I'll be patiently waiting. If Sara continues to struggle accepting Joe's love it could become a source of conflict. What in the heck has happened to Casie?
Connie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from eliz100
This chapter has a great ending. I always like to keep reading and now I have to keep reading. This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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This chapter has a great ending. I always like to keep reading and now I have to keep reading. This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Belinda
Interesting chapter, with a hook at the end. But don't bother about our curiosity, Barbara, we will wait until you recover from the next surgery.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Interesting chapter, with a hook at the end. But don't bother about our curiosity, Barbara, we will wait until you recover from the next surgery.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support. I appreciate both.
Comment from R. K. Alan
Why do I have an ominous feeling something is about to happen to Cassie? Enquiring minds need to know... Thanks for this latest chapter. Ray aka krylon
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Why do I have an ominous feeling something is about to happen to Cassie? Enquiring minds need to know... Thanks for this latest chapter. Ray aka krylon
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from fionageorge
This is such a lovely and sensual chapter, and I felt the intensity of the emotions as the dialogue and narrative drew me in. Great love scene, withouth going into too much detail.
Then, whammie, the pain starts, and Cassie isn't home yet!
Now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Cassie spends a[remove 'a] two hours with friends
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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This is such a lovely and sensual chapter, and I felt the intensity of the emotions as the dialogue and narrative drew me in. Great love scene, withouth going into too much detail.
Then, whammie, the pain starts, and Cassie isn't home yet!
Now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Cassie spends a[remove 'a] two hours with friends
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I will take care of that error.
