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Comment from TT7Z
This piece is well done. I can almost feel your excitement of expectation with the upcoming time ahead. Your piece creates clear pictures of children warming their hands by the fire and wrapped around a nice warm mug of hot cocoa. With residual images of everyone having cocoa mustaches and laughing about it. Very well done. Nicely written, best wishes on upcoming holidays. Thank you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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This piece is well done. I can almost feel your excitement of expectation with the upcoming time ahead. Your piece creates clear pictures of children warming their hands by the fire and wrapped around a nice warm mug of hot cocoa. With residual images of everyone having cocoa mustaches and laughing about it. Very well done. Nicely written, best wishes on upcoming holidays. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are appreciated.
Comment from misscookie
Christmas cheer to you all my dear. Your kind a early don't you think.
I love the words of faith cheers and wisdom that you bring to this poem. there is a strong message witin it.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Christmas cheer to you all my dear. Your kind a early don't you think.
I love the words of faith cheers and wisdom that you bring to this poem. there is a strong message witin it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Yes I am early and I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE HOLIDAY SEASON THIS YEAR! Thank You for your kind words they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day!
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And I thought I was the only one to get a jump on the Hoildays And your very welcome Ho,Ho Ho, Merry Christmas!!!1
Comment from pickthorn
Angel Debbie.. I can see this is a happy time in your life. Christmas is not that far off. You are already looking forward to all the fun you are going to have with your new family. I can see your happiness in every line of your poem. Great job.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Angel Debbie.. I can see this is a happy time in your life. Christmas is not that far off. You are already looking forward to all the fun you are going to have with your new family. I can see your happiness in every line of your poem. Great job.
pickthorn
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from joyceebarb
I think your poem is very good except there are many extra
words that I would eliminate so it would flow better.
For instance: I have a special person in my life
I may not be troved as his loving wife
But Christmas will still be a joyous time
The hearts now around me will certainly chime
You can say the same thing with less words so it flows better. I hope you don't mind my input. Just trying to help.
Best Wishes,
Joyce
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I think your poem is very good except there are many extra
words that I would eliminate so it would flow better.
For instance: I have a special person in my life
I may not be troved as his loving wife
But Christmas will still be a joyous time
The hearts now around me will certainly chime
You can say the same thing with less words so it flows better. I hope you don't mind my input. Just trying to help.
Best Wishes,
Joyce
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words they are greatly appreciated. I will look into the extra words comment as you sujested. Have a wonderful day!
