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Love and Life with many emotions
3 total reviews
Comment from
misscookie
love the artwork snd the poem though it was sad. but as one life is gone. the dad is blessed with a new life.
This is a very emotionasl poem and you expressed it well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2010
Thank You very much. Your comments were very much appreciated!
reply by misscookie on 08-Sep-2010
Youare welcome, taske care.
Comment from
TT7Z
Your insight and imagination is brilliant. A rare jewel. Your words capture the imagery of what is happening very well, almost movie like. The beginning was a little rough until you got your meter in place then it smoothed out just fine. Nice piece, good work. Thank you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2010
Thank You very much. Your comments were very much appreciated!
Comment from
Heidixoxo
What a sad lil story you have written. I actually wrote one similar to this if you are interested in reading it. This brought a tear to my eye while I read it. Very touching and well written......Best of luck to you with this. xoxo
Comment Written 07-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2010
Thank You very much. Your comments were very much appreciated!
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