Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Chapter 6 Part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from afternoonlight
Pretty hot! I was away so I must get caught up. As I was reading this I thought the word massage was over used maybe trade one out for a carress instead as ususal your dialogue is easy and excellent and your scene setting lets us be the fly on the wall.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2010
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Pretty hot! I was away so I must get caught up. As I was reading this I thought the word massage was over used maybe trade one out for a carress instead as ususal your dialogue is easy and excellent and your scene setting lets us be the fly on the wall.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2010
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Thank you, I will change that word. I do tend hang on to words.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Written in the distinctive style of an excellent author. Love scenes and dialogue are realistic. Emotions and feelings are strong and strongly described. Good job.
Duane
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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barbara.wilkey,
Written in the distinctive style of an excellent author. Love scenes and dialogue are realistic. Emotions and feelings are strong and strongly described. Good job.
Duane
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Sacred Heart
Hi Barbara,
Excellent writing. Wish I had a six for you
my friend for it deserves it. Please keep it
in your heart where it belongs though okay.
Finally! The love scene was tastefully done and
the chapter was very entertaining. Truly enjoyed.
Look forward to the next one! Take care sweet,
love light Patty
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara,
Excellent writing. Wish I had a six for you
my friend for it deserves it. Please keep it
in your heart where it belongs though okay.
Finally! The love scene was tastefully done and
the chapter was very entertaining. Truly enjoyed.
Look forward to the next one! Take care sweet,
love light Patty
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and your support.
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You are welcome sweet!
Comment from Ailo
Phew, that was a little steamy, lol. Your dialogue is great, the characters seem to interact with one another with such ease. You made the characters seem so real, in the way you put their fears, her stretch marks and his age...yet he answered and it was a witty humor. This is very realistic, but not over the top lust romance. Very romantic. Nice read.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Phew, that was a little steamy, lol. Your dialogue is great, the characters seem to interact with one another with such ease. You made the characters seem so real, in the way you put their fears, her stretch marks and his age...yet he answered and it was a witty humor. This is very realistic, but not over the top lust romance. Very romantic. Nice read.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Nice display, and nice way of keeping us holding our breath. Lol! The presentation was artful and intense. The love and romance shone through, my friend. Great read.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Nice display, and nice way of keeping us holding our breath. Lol! The presentation was artful and intense. The love and romance shone through, my friend. Great read.
Isaiah
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from marcii
This is a good chapter that shows tender moments between too people, two people that are seem real to life for the reader. You have the characters asking questions of themselves and each other, you descriptions are good and the story flows marvelously.
Marcii
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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This is a good chapter that shows tender moments between too people, two people that are seem real to life for the reader. You have the characters asking questions of themselves and each other, you descriptions are good and the story flows marvelously.
Marcii
Comment Written 08-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Earthwriter
wow i must say you have a wonderful way with words i read this piece slowly and savored it excellent job my friend well deserving of a six
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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wow i must say you have a wonderful way with words i read this piece slowly and savored it excellent job my friend well deserving of a six
Comment Written 08-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from GoodieMama
Excellent story. The more I read about Joe and Sara, the more I anticipate the next chapter. It's turning into a great story and I hope your surgery goes well. Magnificent work.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Excellent story. The more I read about Joe and Sara, the more I anticipate the next chapter. It's turning into a great story and I hope your surgery goes well. Magnificent work.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gerry26
This is excellent. Very real. I felt the emotions jump off the page. Your dialog is wonderful and the love comes thru loud and clear. Good luck with you health. I will say prayers.
gerry
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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This is excellent. Very real. I felt the emotions jump off the page. Your dialog is wonderful and the love comes thru loud and clear. Good luck with you health. I will say prayers.
gerry
Comment Written 08-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your review. I had a reviewer say there was no emotion. I am glad you felt it.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
It seems like this couple will be saying, "I do," before that girl stops having doubts about their relationship.
The love-making scene is tastefully done. I love the fact that Joe is the one who ensures that the doors are locked, so that Cassie does not get any untoward surprises.
The picture of the two hearts superimposed is perfect for the chapter.
Juliette
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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It seems like this couple will be saying, "I do," before that girl stops having doubts about their relationship.
The love-making scene is tastefully done. I love the fact that Joe is the one who ensures that the doors are locked, so that Cassie does not get any untoward surprises.
The picture of the two hearts superimposed is perfect for the chapter.
Juliette
Comment Written 08-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your comments.
