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Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Beauty"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from missy98writer
Angle Debbie,
your spiritual verse poetry is very well written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. You paint a picture in the readers head so good imagery. I enjoyed the fourth, fifth and sixth stanzas the best because I love beautiful colors God offers us in nature, and she buzzing of the bumblebees. You poem is excellent in my opinion. Thanks for sharing your spiritual verse about the beauty of Earth, nature and God. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Angle Debbie,
your spiritual verse poetry is very well written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. You paint a picture in the readers head so good imagery. I enjoyed the fourth, fifth and sixth stanzas the best because I love beautiful colors God offers us in nature, and she buzzing of the bumblebees. You poem is excellent in my opinion. Thanks for sharing your spiritual verse about the beauty of Earth, nature and God. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Melissa.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful words of praise. They are greatly appreciated. Thank You again.
Comment from BothePo8
The message of the gifts of God and Man's responsibility to that God are very clear and well written. The author has done well in this. However, a poem that uses rhyme should be smooth and rhythmical, like dancing or singing. It is my opinion that the author fell a little short here. As an example of rhythm and rhyme, the first few lines might go something like this: I hope you'll take a walk with me, to see some things we both can see...God's gift of beauty girl and boy, partake of this and share my joy......Again this is just a suggestion about rhythm and rhyme.......Nice effort...we all have things to work on
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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The message of the gifts of God and Man's responsibility to that God are very clear and well written. The author has done well in this. However, a poem that uses rhyme should be smooth and rhythmical, like dancing or singing. It is my opinion that the author fell a little short here. As an example of rhythm and rhyme, the first few lines might go something like this: I hope you'll take a walk with me, to see some things we both can see...God's gift of beauty girl and boy, partake of this and share my joy......Again this is just a suggestion about rhythm and rhyme.......Nice effort...we all have things to work on
Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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I will take into consideration for what you have said thank you for a honest review. Comments are always welcomed like this as to learn from. Thank You again for your comments.
Comment from TT7Z
Very well done. Good rhyming. The overall message is clear. Picture is an excellent selection that complements your piece. Lovely piece of work, well done. Thank you.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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Very well done. Good rhyming. The overall message is clear. Picture is an excellent selection that complements your piece. Lovely piece of work, well done. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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Thank You so much for your kind words. Thay are greatly appreciated.
Comment from misscookie
The artwork is awesome
As well as your poem for beauty is all around u, giving to us free, we just have to take time and enjoy and give Him thanks.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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The artwork is awesome
As well as your poem for beauty is all around u, giving to us free, we just have to take time and enjoy and give Him thanks.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind and beautiful words.
