Mountain Spirits
Remembering the Rockies22 total reviews
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
your double Tetractys poem is in perfect form and syllable count. You paint a beautiful picture in the readers head. Gorgeous art work and color presentation. Great title 'Mountain Spirits' I enjoyed the lines:
relishing
crystalline air
inhaling spirits of a mountain lea
come soar away into wild ecstasy
gliding with grace
fly away
You poem is an excellent entry in the Tetractys contest. Good luck in the contest. It was a delight to read your nature themed Tetractys poem. The Rockies are exquisite. I haven't been to Colorado since I was twenty over twenty-four years ago.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Susan,
your double Tetractys poem is in perfect form and syllable count. You paint a beautiful picture in the readers head. Gorgeous art work and color presentation. Great title 'Mountain Spirits' I enjoyed the lines:
relishing
crystalline air
inhaling spirits of a mountain lea
come soar away into wild ecstasy
gliding with grace
fly away
You poem is an excellent entry in the Tetractys contest. Good luck in the contest. It was a delight to read your nature themed Tetractys poem. The Rockies are exquisite. I haven't been to Colorado since I was twenty over twenty-four years ago.
Melissa.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Melissa!! Thank you! I sure hope you will get to go again!! I want to also!! And soon. It's expensive to live there tho, I hear. But so gorgeous. And I thank you for this wonderful rating and your time for me too Melissa!! ") Smiles!! Susan
Comment from Jnetgame
Wow this is a great double tetractys. I like the relaxing, soothing tone of it. Nothing to change. Good luck in the contest. I think one has a good chance!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Wow this is a great double tetractys. I like the relaxing, soothing tone of it. Nothing to change. Good luck in the contest. I think one has a good chance!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Jenny!!! Thank you SO very much! What a treat to have a six! You are so nice! AND it makes it so worthwhile when someone really likes our work! Thank you so!!! Susan
Comment from adewpearl
Susan, your poem is in excellent double tetractys form both in syllable count and structure, and I love your use of alliteration and rhyming. I can just feel the crystalline air :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Susan, your poem is in excellent double tetractys form both in syllable count and structure, and I love your use of alliteration and rhyming. I can just feel the crystalline air :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Brooke! Wouldn't it be nice to go there?? I want to again someday. Thank you dear for this great review!! I always appreciate your time and help...and wonderful encouragment!! ") Susan
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, your words paint
such a lovely picture
of their own, altho
the one you chose is
so apt.
Good luck with the contest, Sue.
Margaret
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Oh, your words paint
such a lovely picture
of their own, altho
the one you chose is
so apt.
Good luck with the contest, Sue.
Margaret
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Oh thank you Margaret!! It was a fun effort, the mountains are the best subject sometimes! The photos I saw were amazing, and this one stood out for some reason...I am thrilled to have you review for me my friend!! Hugs!! Susan
Comment from Daylok
Very Nice! I too love eagles!! To see an eagle in the wild would be amazing. I am so happy you saw one and shared this lovely poem!! Good luck!!-Daylok
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Very Nice! I too love eagles!! To see an eagle in the wild would be amazing. I am so happy you saw one and shared this lovely poem!! Good luck!!-Daylok
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi there Day! We have the golden eagles here, I think a few bald eagles, but they are so rare. Thank you for this great review! I really appreciate!! ") luv, Susan
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent double Tetracty poem. You have used the words correctly and created a very serene picture. I am a mountain lover and I know the feeling of freedom and the desire to fly in such a setting. The picture is perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is an excellent double Tetracty poem. You have used the words correctly and created a very serene picture. I am a mountain lover and I know the feeling of freedom and the desire to fly in such a setting. The picture is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Beth! Thank you very much!! I wish I could fly away to where it is quiet and nice. But oh well! Thanks for this kind and very welcome review Beth!!! ") Susan
Comment from G.Denton
I like the imagery in this, can just imagine standing on a mountain, breathing in and watching that bird fly overhead. Makes me want to visit colarado! :)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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I like the imagery in this, can just imagine standing on a mountain, breathing in and watching that bird fly overhead. Makes me want to visit colarado! :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Me too!! I saw many gorgeous photos this time! Lots of wonderful picture takers on FanArt!! ") I really appreciate this kind review!! ") Susan
Comment from chells36
This is a lovely poem with a richness that would appeal to all those people that feel trapped in life as it holds the enchantment of openness
The poem is well written with a great flow
Keep up the good work xx
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is a lovely poem with a richness that would appeal to all those people that feel trapped in life as it holds the enchantment of openness
The poem is well written with a great flow
Keep up the good work xx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Chells! A four means revisions needed, please tell me what I need to change and why? Thank you so much! Susan
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork it is splendid
You expressed the mountain so realistic I felt as if I was standing on the highest hill seeing that beautiful eagle soar across the green land.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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I love the artwork it is splendid
You expressed the mountain so realistic I felt as if I was standing on the highest hill seeing that beautiful eagle soar across the green land.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Hi Cookie! Thank you so much!! It's wonderful having you read my work!! ") HUGS! Susan
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It was my pleasure, take care.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful tetractys, i want to fly away too. where will we go? i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful tetractys, i want to fly away too. where will we go? i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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UP UP and AWAY!! ") Wouldn't it be neat? I have wondered if I would have the guts to go on one of the ultra-lites...I imagine that is as close as it gets to being a bird!? Thank you for this great review!! I always appreciate! Susan
