Another Pretty Face
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Comment from R. K. Alan
The mind boggles as to what they could do to occupy their along time... Loved the easy flow of the dialogue, you make it look and sound so natural. I suspect, however, she will not be returning home by 6... I hope I am wrong. Ray aka Krylon
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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The mind boggles as to what they could do to occupy their along time... Loved the easy flow of the dialogue, you make it look and sound so natural. I suspect, however, she will not be returning home by 6... I hope I am wrong. Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 30-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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You are not wrong. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, good ole' Joe to the rescue again. What a guy. Cassie and Sara are very lucky to have him in their lives. I hope the kid, Marc, will lay off Cassie now. Keep writing.
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Barbara, good ole' Joe to the rescue again. What a guy. Cassie and Sara are very lucky to have him in their lives. I hope the kid, Marc, will lay off Cassie now. Keep writing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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We will see Marc again, soon. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Another great chapter. I am enjoying the story very much. The chapters are real and the character are as well. I see no editing needed.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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Another great chapter. I am enjoying the story very much. The chapters are real and the character are as well. I see no editing needed.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from RebelRose
That Joe is surely a winner. A long distance romance is never easy even with all those planes at his disposal. I am anxious to see how this plays out. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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That Joe is surely a winner. A long distance romance is never easy even with all those planes at his disposal. I am anxious to see how this plays out. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, and another great chapter for your book. i keep thinking cassie is going to get drawn into something wrong with the computer. i am still praying for you.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, and another great chapter for your book. i keep thinking cassie is going to get drawn into something wrong with the computer. i am still praying for you.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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I think you may be right. We will find out within the next three posts. Thank you for your prayers, everything is in God's hands.
Comment from Rama Rao
Another excellent chapter from you. It's always good to see your post, for it shows God is in heaven and all is well with your world. It's amazing to see you posting a chapter of a romantic novel when you are waiting for your next surgery. The last line takes the cake.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Another excellent chapter from you. It's always good to see your post, for it shows God is in heaven and all is well with your world. It's amazing to see you posting a chapter of a romantic novel when you are waiting for your next surgery. The last line takes the cake.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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I have put everything in God's hands. I have to stay busy so I don't worry. I need all the support from my friends. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Fireshadow
Hi, Barbara. This writing is excellent, the narrative flows smoothly, the dialogue is crisp and credible, and the storyline quite interesting. I like your direct style of writing without superfluous adornments. Very well done. Amarillys
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Hi, Barbara. This writing is excellent, the narrative flows smoothly, the dialogue is crisp and credible, and the storyline quite interesting. I like your direct style of writing without superfluous adornments. Very well done. Amarillys
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Sacred Heart
Hi Barbara,
This is a great chapter. I really am enjoying
the charactors and I really like the dialog, it's
very real and natural. I like the interplay between Joe and Cassie. I'm sorry I'm a little behind on your writes,
I was on vacation and I'm still trying to catch up with everyone. I'm looking forward to the next chapter too.
Have an inspiring week sweety. Blessings, Love Light Patty
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Hi Barbara,
This is a great chapter. I really am enjoying
the charactors and I really like the dialog, it's
very real and natural. I like the interplay between Joe and Cassie. I'm sorry I'm a little behind on your writes,
I was on vacation and I'm still trying to catch up with everyone. I'm looking forward to the next chapter too.
Have an inspiring week sweety. Blessings, Love Light Patty
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
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Your so welcome. Take care, Patty
Comment from essence56
Thank you so much for your writing. You are so talented and awesome. Your courage I commend. Very good chapter and I wait for more. Thanks and god bless keep hanging in there.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you so much for your writing. You are so talented and awesome. Your courage I commend. Very good chapter and I wait for more. Thanks and god bless keep hanging in there.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your support. I can't begin to tell you how much it means to me. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Joe made Cassie happy when he defended against a boy harassing her. Joe made a big commitment to Cassie. He promised to help her even if her mother and he broke of their relationship. Sarah and Joe sound like a good couple, but the relationship might not last.
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Joe made Cassie happy when he defended against a boy harassing her. Joe made a big commitment to Cassie. He promised to help her even if her mother and he broke of their relationship. Sarah and Joe sound like a good couple, but the relationship might not last.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
