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A Letter to a Friend

I miss you very much

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You have written a heartfelt letter to your special friend. I don't know what to say except you both are in my prayers.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Thank you. He is a precious and very sweet man.
Comment from adewpearl
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What a moving letter, Valerie - I never read this writer's work beyond maybe once or twice - I am so sorry to hear he is long absent and that this has caused you such distress. Yes, it is horrible that so many deserving and good people suffer and struggle in this world - surely, our having good or troubling lives has nothing to do with who earned good or bad. That is why I have never believed in karma or in any other philosophical or theological theories that purport that good things happen to good people and bad things happen to bad people. However God operates, it is definitely not using that principle, something I figured out when I was 8 and my mother died. I do hope you hear from your friend soon. Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Thank you. I hope I am just overreacting but it has been so long since I've heard from him that I have begun to worry. He is such a sweet, kind person and I just think the world of him.
reply by adewpearl on 23-Aug-2010
    Some people I have thought a great deal of have disappeared like this - it is human nature to worry.
Comment from Soledadpaz
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What a lovely message, Sasha. I hope he reads and responds with his poetry. I also hope the demons are at bay and he can rest easy, if only for a few moments at a time. It is cruel that he should pay so dearly. I will pray for him as well.

Take care,
Sole

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Thank you so very much. I is such dear, sweet person and I miss him so very much.
Comment from missy98writer
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Sasha,
your letter non-fiction piece is marvelously written. Cool art work. I adore your narrative. Your letter was moving. Here are the points that stand out:

Have the demons returned? Are you fighting yet one more battle knowing even if you win, another will replace it wearing you down a little more each time. Times like this shake my faith in God. Why would He allow you, a man who served his country with dignity and horror, return with scars that cause ignorant strangers to avoid eye contact and step aside out of foolish fear? Scars that manifest in horrific dreams filled with memories even the strongest could not endure. I would ask Him why he added to your already heavy burden by torturing your mind with the cruelest affliction, schizophrenia.
We have so much in common. There was a time when I felt God had abandoned me to a world of darkness, hallucinations, fear, and unspeakable cruelty. Yet, he chose to send my demons back to hell where they belong. It seems wrong that he has not done the same for you.


My heart is heavy and I can no longer fight back the tears. I miss you my dear friend. I pray that God hears my prayer and sends the demons back where they belong so you can come home and be my friend again.

Your essay letter is poignant and moving. I'm sure you friend will appreciate your loving write to him. I always look forward to your fabulous essays. This did not disappoint. You are a very talented writer and I'm proud to call you a friend.
Melissa.


 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Thank you very much. I haven't heard from my friend in quite some time which is not a good sign. I worry about him and can only pray he is okay.
Comment from acvguard11
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very good job..i really liked it....i also really liked the photo that you put with this...great job and keep writing if you love it dont let others discourage you

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Thanks for the great review. He is a very dear friend and I worry about him all the time. I can only pray he is okay.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, a great letter to your friend. i enjoyed reading it and seeing the love that you have for this person. great job

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    He is truly a dear friend and I worry about him all the time.
Comment from Fireshadow
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This is a beautiful, heartfelt letter written with tremendous love and respect for a special friend, someone who would be shunned by others due to their lack of understanding and compassion. Your friend is so lucky to have you care so much for him (her). I pray that your prayers are answered and the those demons will be eradicated. Many blessing to you and your friend. Amarillys

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    We both pray for the same thing. He is a special person and I care very much for him.
Comment from c_lucas
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War will tear down the defenses of an intelligent, civilized individual. The mind will play games. This will play havoc with anyone who has experience traumatic events. I trust your friend is all right.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    He is a sweet and gentle man and I miss him very much. I can only pray that he is okay.
reply by c_lucas on 23-Aug-2010
    You are a wonderful person to care for another writer. Charlie
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for introducing us to your friend and for your caring notes about the diseases he struggles with--I hope he gets back in contact with you soon. Your evocative painting is a most appropriate choice to accompany this post. I agree with you about the "needless cruelty" and send my wishes that our fellow FanStorian is safe and finds his way home. With a heavy but hopeful heart- Joan

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 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    He is such a dear man and I miss him very much. Thank you for your very kind review. I am sure he would appreciate it too.
reply by Joan E. on 23-Aug-2010
    I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you hear from him soon. -J
Comment from kerrikat
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I too Suffer from PTSD and I'm bipolar. Few people understand or try to understand us. Good piece. I wish the best for both of you. Peace&Love,Kerri

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2010


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
    Than you so very much. Mental illness is still something people are afraid of and it is their ignorance that frustrated me. I too suffer from Borederline Personality Disorder and know all the hostility involved with having a mental illness. I miss my friend terribly and can only pray is is okay. Thank you so very much for the 6 stars. I am sure he would be pleased too.