Comment from TT7Z

Excellent

Perfect example of you get what you pay for, then more bills. Nice job. Excellent picture for a bill collector. Maybe a money green background perhaps to set the scene might be in order. Good rhyming and flow to this piece. Excellent job. Thank you.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2010

Yes green background makes more of an impact. Thank You for suggesting it. Thank You for your comments they are appreciated.

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

Who can't relate to this poem? Lol. I enjoyed reading this. It's filled with humor, reality and pain.

I found one thing you might want to fix: Having 'too' much money. - Thesis

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2010

Thank you glad you can relate and enjoyed this read all in one. Thank you for the kind review. I did make the change.

Comment from shrawdergirl

Good

This was an enjoyable read and a topic almost everyone can relate to. There were few minor things that caught my attention. In the third stanza "your" needs to be "you're" and in the sixth stanza change "to" to "too." Other than that it was well done and entertaining!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2010

Thank you glad you can relate and enjoyed this read all in one. Thank you for the kind review. I did make the change.