Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "I Am Human You Are Human Too!"Love and Life with many emotions
17 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the art work it is fitting for your poem.
I love how the poem flows. I sense you are saying.
"You have tried the rest
Now tried the best."
Him
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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I love the art work it is fitting for your poem.
I love how the poem flows. I sense you are saying.
"You have tried the rest
Now tried the best."
Him
Comment Written 03-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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Yes, Thank you Miss cookie for your pleasant review! It was well recieved. Have a wonderful day:)
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You are verywelcome, take care.
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You are verywelcome, take care.
Comment from keimosobie
good message but the flow and the rymes are a little of.
sounds like it was therapeutic to you. Hashing some stuff out. God knows you did the right thing. Youll be OK. Focus on helping when you can and be the blessing im sure you are.
keimosobie
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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good message but the flow and the rymes are a little of.
sounds like it was therapeutic to you. Hashing some stuff out. God knows you did the right thing. Youll be OK. Focus on helping when you can and be the blessing im sure you are.
keimosobie
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words they are greatly appreciated.
Comment from msdebra
This is a nice poem with a good story. I could feel a lot of heart in it. I especially like the line: Who cares what the world has to say; it's what is inside that should matter the most. Very nice.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is a nice poem with a good story. I could feel a lot of heart in it. I especially like the line: Who cares what the world has to say; it's what is inside that should matter the most. Very nice.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Thank You msdebra for catching what so many others and I have missed. Please review the read again as corrections have been made. Thank you again.
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Thank you for making the corrections. It reads much better. I upgraded it to excellent!
Comment from Alan K Pease
I almost had a song of George Michael to read the rhythm to it but I can't remember the name. You have done well showing the fallacies of relationships and trying to overcome them. I was particularly drawn to these verses which seem to summarize your thoughts
We learn and grow through our Lord's teachings and love
In time everything should fit perfect like a glove.
Trials and tribulations plague us now as we learn
It also sometimes sets us to burn.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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I almost had a song of George Michael to read the rhythm to it but I can't remember the name. You have done well showing the fallacies of relationships and trying to overcome them. I was particularly drawn to these verses which seem to summarize your thoughts
We learn and grow through our Lord's teachings and love
In time everything should fit perfect like a glove.
Trials and tribulations plague us now as we learn
It also sometimes sets us to burn.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are really appreciated. Thank You again and have a nice day!
Comment from 239matthew
This is all inspiring. To stand tall and strong with the strength of the Lord within oneself regardless of flaws or short comings as a team not sure of its own destiny yet willing to remain bonded regardless of the pain and turmoil. Tremendously powerful commitment in the face of
Unstableness.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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This is all inspiring. To stand tall and strong with the strength of the Lord within oneself regardless of flaws or short comings as a team not sure of its own destiny yet willing to remain bonded regardless of the pain and turmoil. Tremendously powerful commitment in the face of
Unstableness.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are really appreciated. Thank You again and have a nice day!
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I thank you for your strength and the courage to put your feels out there.
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Your more than welcome. This is a true happening in my life. And I thank the Lord for helping us see His light!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Angel welcome to Fanstory,
I enjoyed reading your thoughts about man and woman and the fact you have very nice spiritual thoughts weaved into you rhyming poem.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Hello Angel welcome to Fanstory,
I enjoyed reading your thoughts about man and woman and the fact you have very nice spiritual thoughts weaved into you rhyming poem.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Well, Thank you kind person that was much appreciated.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from ThomasDennisC
I love your piece.
1. I love the tension in each stanza. A soul reaching out.
2. Good usage of the poetic styles.
3. Good play on words, I like the Rhyme and Rhythm.
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I need to remember all who love me for who am
I got to remember I'm not a very smart ma-am
Brains and brawn I have only one of the two
The man I love has the other and now he is blue
keep up the good work.
restlesspen
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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I love your piece.
1. I love the tension in each stanza. A soul reaching out.
2. Good usage of the poetic styles.
3. Good play on words, I like the Rhyme and Rhythm.
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I need to remember all who love me for who am
I got to remember I'm not a very smart ma-am
Brains and brawn I have only one of the two
The man I love has the other and now he is blue
keep up the good work.
restlesspen
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank You for your positive words of wisdom. They are really appreciated. Thank You and have a wonderful day!
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You are most welcome :-)
keep up the good work.
Comment from TT7Z
Good piece. Nice form, good rhyme. You have a lot going on in this piece, a lot of emotional turmoil. This turmoil and emotion is very well conveyed. Again nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Good piece. Nice form, good rhyme. You have a lot going on in this piece, a lot of emotional turmoil. This turmoil and emotion is very well conveyed. Again nice job.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are very appreciated. Thank You
Comment from Suzie Q
This is beautiful! You expressed your emotions so well. I especially liked " Just to be crushed by my own harms, Hold me tight in Your loving arms, I need Your love and care, For this fault I do bear" Well said! I love what you said and the way you said it. Great job! God bless you :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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This is beautiful! You expressed your emotions so well. I especially liked " Just to be crushed by my own harms, Hold me tight in Your loving arms, I need Your love and care, For this fault I do bear" Well said! I love what you said and the way you said it. Great job! God bless you :)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Thank you for such kind words. They are taken with highest appreciation.
Comment from InHisownwrite
You pour your heart out in this one...
Straight to the paper..... A personal example that will help someone else along the way..... I admire you for that.. What can I say? A very good emotional piece that is also very inspiring..... The dirt comes out in the wash... And we all have to go through something.... You, however share an invaluable lesson.... Good for you!
Bryan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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You pour your heart out in this one...
Straight to the paper..... A personal example that will help someone else along the way..... I admire you for that.. What can I say? A very good emotional piece that is also very inspiring..... The dirt comes out in the wash... And we all have to go through something.... You, however share an invaluable lesson.... Good for you!
Bryan
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Thank You Bryan I am glad you caught the message. This was a little hard to swallow and write but I'm please on how it came out! Thank you for your kind words.
