Compassion Cares
A soul can heal22 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
I review everything you write, so how did I miss this one?Anyway we're fellow nominees for POM, so here I am now. This points out despair which we all suffer but turns it to hope and ends beautifully. BRAVO (I don't know if it's too late, but I think I'd drop the "but" at the beginning of the third couplet. It throws the line and isn't necessary! Just a thought)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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I review everything you write, so how did I miss this one?Anyway we're fellow nominees for POM, so here I am now. This points out despair which we all suffer but turns it to hope and ends beautifully. BRAVO (I don't know if it's too late, but I think I'd drop the "but" at the beginning of the third couplet. It throws the line and isn't necessary! Just a thought)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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Hi Judian!! Yes, and congrats to you! I am shocked as for myself, boy. AND I removed the "But" you are so right, it was unnecessary! Thank you so much. It's always great to hear your thoughts Jude! ") Susan
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Oh, good I'm so glad you could slip in and do that. I had a slight blip in my entry as well, which I was able to correct. Phew!
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Hi there, will PM you in a bit, news of book purchase! ") S.
Comment from jack silver
Simply amazing piece of writing. perfectly written and crafted out. I enjoyed reading this. well worth the six stars. If their was such a thing as ten stars this one would have gotten it.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Simply amazing piece of writing. perfectly written and crafted out. I enjoyed reading this. well worth the six stars. If their was such a thing as ten stars this one would have gotten it.
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Jack
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Hi Jack, thank you very much! I am so happy you enjoyed this! I've never had anyone think my work would be a ten!! Thank you, you have made my day!! ") Susan
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Well worded and well rhymed presentation, Susan. I found the poem to be thought provoking--a look into your heart and soul. One concern:
Without the breast of earth and sky>>I'd pluralize "breats".
Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Well worded and well rhymed presentation, Susan. I found the poem to be thought provoking--a look into your heart and soul. One concern:
Without the breast of earth and sky>>I'd pluralize "breats".
Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 06-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Hi again! Yes, you're right! I will do that! Thank you Isaiah. I love this photo, it is unusually nice. So good to hear from you again! Susan
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is truly lovely,
Susan - and my sentiments
exactly - I applaud you
for your spirit, my friend.
All in all, a most impressive
piece and deserving of a six.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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This is truly lovely,
Susan - and my sentiments
exactly - I applaud you
for your spirit, my friend.
All in all, a most impressive
piece and deserving of a six.
Margaret.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Wow and wow again! THank you Margaret! A six... what a treat. I am just thrilled that you liked this. I was so lucky to find the perfect photo for it too. I wish I could take pictures like that!! I have seen the sun like this a few times, and was so glad to see it in print. Thank you so much, for this wonderful review. You are a great inspiration to me. Love, Susan
Comment from Carrie Smith
Hi Susan, This such a positive poem. I think this is so true and we should all appreciate what a gift nature gives to us. Loved the font colors. I have one problem - in the next to the last verse, leaving out the word "near" makes it flow better for me - this is just me. Really a great job! LOL...Susan
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Hi Susan, This such a positive poem. I think this is so true and we should all appreciate what a gift nature gives to us. Loved the font colors. I have one problem - in the next to the last verse, leaving out the word "near" makes it flow better for me - this is just me. Really a great job! LOL...Susan
Comment Written 06-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Hi Susan! Thank you so MUCH! I am thrilled you like this, and I will check out the word near too! I appreciate your help and time to let me know your thoughts too! SO good to hear from you, ps...your letter is on the way! ") Love, Susan
Comment from anne1204
Very good. I like all the descriptions of life and emotions in this one. Very good picture as always. Your rhyme is great. Good writing Anne 1204
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Very good. I like all the descriptions of life and emotions in this one. Very good picture as always. Your rhyme is great. Good writing Anne 1204
Comment Written 06-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Hi Anne! Thank you! I love that picture too, it would be nice framed on the wall! Like a poster. I am happy you liked this, it was just for fun. Happy Friday! ") Susan
Comment from fluffnstuff
oh you goo-ball you. what a lovely poem. i certainly hope you are creating a book...'cause i certainly would purchase it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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oh you goo-ball you. what a lovely poem. i certainly hope you are creating a book...'cause i certainly would purchase it.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Hi Di!! HUGS! For a sixer! Thank you SO much!! And for introducing me to Kathryn Varuzza, she is so sweet, just like you. I don't know about a book, I havn'w won many contests, but still, who knows. It would be fun! Thank you Miss Fluffers for being such a wonderful fan and friend. Love, Susan
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Susan:)
What a wonderful message of hope and faith. it's true that God's earth and sky can heal as the breezes bring fresh air and rain washes away our cares. It is always God's compassion that we feel.
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts with rhythm, rhyme and great flow. I feel renewed as I read.
Roger
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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Hi Susan:)
What a wonderful message of hope and faith. it's true that God's earth and sky can heal as the breezes bring fresh air and rain washes away our cares. It is always God's compassion that we feel.
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts with rhythm, rhyme and great flow. I feel renewed as I read.
Roger
Comment Written 05-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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Hi again! Thank you, this kind of review makes it all so worthwhile. I am so glad you liked this one. Happy thoughts and prayers Roger. Susan
Comment from Ted T
Hi Susan :)
This one is a little on the sad side, but not too much. There's some redeeming value in the message.
The piece deserves a "fiver."
Ted
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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Hi Susan :)
This one is a little on the sad side, but not too much. There's some redeeming value in the message.
The piece deserves a "fiver."
Ted
Comment Written 05-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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Thank you Ted! Every review you send is welcome, and appreciated. Every one. ") Susan
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Thank you :)
Comment from Lois Delaney
I really do like this poem.
Exactly, life seems to travel by nicely until someone comes along and tears it down. When it happens time and again, it's hard to pick up the pieces, and keep treading along.
I can't say I would change anything here. You did well here as far as I could tell/ Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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I really do like this poem.
Exactly, life seems to travel by nicely until someone comes along and tears it down. When it happens time and again, it's hard to pick up the pieces, and keep treading along.
I can't say I would change anything here. You did well here as far as I could tell/ Great job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2010
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Hi Lois! Well, thank you so much! I am pleased you enjoyed this, and also that you took a minute to let me know with this kind and welcome rating! ") Thank you again. Susan
