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Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork it fits your poem perfectly.
I love how the poem flows and the way you express the feeling of angels it was lovely.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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I love the artwork it fits your poem perfectly.
I love how the poem flows and the way you express the feeling of angels it was lovely.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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Thank Yopu so much, your comments were taken with grace.
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You are very welcome. Have a blessed day.
Comment from msdebra
This is a very beautiful poem. The rhyming is good. I enjoyed the message it has in it. I especially liked the lines: I am an angel without any wings, with my smiles I bring great things. Lovely words. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is a very beautiful poem. The rhyming is good. I enjoyed the message it has in it. I especially liked the lines: I am an angel without any wings, with my smiles I bring great things. Lovely words. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writting it. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from RYME4U
This is a good poem,it is very introspective and sad in a way. It does rhyme but in an uneven way. I think this could be edited a little to smoothe it out. Then it would be excellent
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is a good poem,it is very introspective and sad in a way. It does rhyme but in an uneven way. I think this could be edited a little to smoothe it out. Then it would be excellent
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Thank You for you kind words they will be taken to heart.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful poem about angels being able to hurt and feel as well, if angels can fall, then angels can feel.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful poem about angels being able to hurt and feel as well, if angels can fall, then angels can feel.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank You for the kind words. They are so welcome and appreciated. Thank you again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from jwlee211
What a great poem. Such a strong message for the reader. You pull us into the poem and remind us that God does give us salvation and a relief from pain. Great work
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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What a great poem. Such a strong message for the reader. You pull us into the poem and remind us that God does give us salvation and a relief from pain. Great work
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank You so much for the positive review this is so wlcoming. Thank You again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from Joshua Chen
Nice poem! It wasmostly good, but I gave it a four because of the third stanza's inconsistency and the feeling that you could've used more vivid word choice.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Nice poem! It wasmostly good, but I gave it a four because of the third stanza's inconsistency and the feeling that you could've used more vivid word choice.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your point of view I will take this comment into consideration. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from rozie12
I have never thought about angles in this way before. Thank you for bringing this to my mind.
I love your poem, but think you could add some color and possibly a picture to make the poem seem more eye catching.
Thank you
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2010
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I have never thought about angles in this way before. Thank you for bringing this to my mind.
I love your poem, but think you could add some color and possibly a picture to make the poem seem more eye catching.
Thank you
Comment Written 31-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your gracious remarks they are greatly appreciated. I will look into the picture and color for this poem. Thank You again.
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
I enjoyed reading this very much, but do not agree that this is what angels are. Sorry. As so many are without food, shoes, or even housing and medicine. Where is their angel? Thanks for sharing. Betty
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed reading this very much, but do not agree that this is what angels are. Sorry. As so many are without food, shoes, or even housing and medicine. Where is their angel? Thanks for sharing. Betty
Comment Written 30-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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Thank You for your comment, much appreciated.
Comment from dabest4me
Most interesting...stats out with a bunch of questions, it's ok, but somehow inbetween I got lost. Somehow that last two lines don't match with the rest. I gave you a 5 because, I cannot tell you exactly what to improve.
All I can tell you is sit back, take this piece of pie with some cocoa or coffee and reflect on what's written.
Keep writing and I keep reading.
"piece of Pie"
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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Most interesting...stats out with a bunch of questions, it's ok, but somehow inbetween I got lost. Somehow that last two lines don't match with the rest. I gave you a 5 because, I cannot tell you exactly what to improve.
All I can tell you is sit back, take this piece of pie with some cocoa or coffee and reflect on what's written.
Keep writing and I keep reading.
"piece of Pie"
Comment Written 29-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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Thank You, I will have pie and cocoa and think about what I will write about next!
Comment from Roecourt
"Its because their hurting by the mile." = they're not their.
I'm kind of confused - is this about you, or Angels in general, or how to become an Angel? Each part seems to have a different focus and I'm coming away confused.
Thank you for writing!
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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"Its because their hurting by the mile." = they're not their.
I'm kind of confused - is this about you, or Angels in general, or how to become an Angel? Each part seems to have a different focus and I'm coming away confused.
Thank you for writing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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Thank You for your comments.
