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Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Pimp"Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.
5 total reviews
Comment from Realist101
Hahahahahaaaa!!!! I love this ending....SO typically male, still worried about if she is naked! Ha. Your dialogue is always so strong, and not overdone. It flows along, like people are really conversing...I have much to learn from you! GOOD work here! Susan
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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Hahahahahaaaa!!!! I love this ending....SO typically male, still worried about if she is naked! Ha. Your dialogue is always so strong, and not overdone. It flows along, like people are really conversing...I have much to learn from you! GOOD work here! Susan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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I'n flattered, thank you
Comment from WRITER1
This is really funny, I like the way you pandered the words. Just like a married old couple. And in the end he stilled wanted to know if she was naked.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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This is really funny, I like the way you pandered the words. Just like a married old couple. And in the end he stilled wanted to know if she was naked.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks. Glad you liked it. And once a man gets an idea of a woman naled in his head, it's very hard to shift.
Comment from Adri7enne
Loved it Snod. Hell, Andrew Christmas sounds positively interesting. Teasing, cool, witty. Yep, I like him. You've given him good lines. Maybe you're not so weird, then. Shame. Yes, Andrew Christmas sounds positively yummy. LOL!
This was a fun read. Nicely entertaining for a cloudy summer evening. I'm still having fun. Next!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Loved it Snod. Hell, Andrew Christmas sounds positively interesting. Teasing, cool, witty. Yep, I like him. You've given him good lines. Maybe you're not so weird, then. Shame. Yes, Andrew Christmas sounds positively yummy. LOL!
This was a fun read. Nicely entertaining for a cloudy summer evening. I'm still having fun. Next!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks. I'm getting jealous of him now.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of writing that demonstrates treachery, and a base type of love relationship where people just use each other to achieve their purpose. kudos
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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This is a nice piece of writing that demonstrates treachery, and a base type of love relationship where people just use each other to achieve their purpose. kudos
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Thank you. I'm not sure that's what I was aiming for, but I'll take what I can get.
Comment from SamanthaD.
I've been wondering where you were- I haven't sen any of your posts lately. But I took a break for awhile too and now my muse has fallen into a coma or something....
I really like this story- it's suspenseful and funny. I like it so much that I'm going to go back & read other prior chapters!
Samantha
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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I've been wondering where you were- I haven't sen any of your posts lately. But I took a break for awhile too and now my muse has fallen into a coma or something....
I really like this story- it's suspenseful and funny. I like it so much that I'm going to go back & read other prior chapters!
Samantha
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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I'm posting most days. I guess the timing has just been wrong. Thanks for the review.
