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Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Lion's Den"Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.
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Comment from WRITER1
Things are moving right along in this story. Laura did decide to go along with Christmas' plan. I do hope she doesn't get caught.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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Things are moving right along in this story. Laura did decide to go along with Christmas' plan. I do hope she doesn't get caught.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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Shhh! Don't give away the plot. Thanks for the review
Comment from Adri7enne
You build tension well, snod. You made me feel Laura's reluctance and fear:"Still her feet remained stationary, her legs suddenly robbed of the ability to walk,"
You're creating a whole world and a society here. It's a fun ride. I'm glad I'm taking the trip. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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You build tension well, snod. You made me feel Laura's reluctance and fear:"Still her feet remained stationary, her legs suddenly robbed of the ability to walk,"
You're creating a whole world and a society here. It's a fun ride. I'm glad I'm taking the trip. Keep writing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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Thanks. Glad you're still in for the ride
