Audition
Girard always wanted to be an actor113 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This happening would definitely have wound up as an out-take on the editing floor. (I often wonder what happens to those things. Over time, they could actually be worth a lot of money!) LOL You have a keen sense of humor, Mastery.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This happening would definitely have wound up as an out-take on the editing floor. (I often wonder what happens to those things. Over time, they could actually be worth a lot of money!) LOL You have a keen sense of humor, Mastery.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Spangle. I am som glad you enjoyed this one. (pardon the language, I hope) : ) Bob
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Thank you, my friend. Bob
Comment from Rikki66
Excellent job, acting is hard at the best of times and worse when you have cancer and stage fright. It is, however, the more logical response to cannon fire. I responded that way to howitzer fire.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Excellent job, acting is hard at the best of times and worse when you have cancer and stage fright. It is, however, the more logical response to cannon fire. I responded that way to howitzer fire.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Rikki. : ) Bob
Comment from Tootsie55
So glad to give you another SIX! Later in the week and I had not used them all up for a change. This was a great read. Very interesting punch line. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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So glad to give you another SIX! Later in the week and I had not used them all up for a change. This was a great read. Very interesting punch line. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Tootsie. Especially for the precious six. Bless you. Bob
Comment from Sankey
Looks like he as old Mikey and I would say "went off on a 'tangent' " hehe. Well done for a shorty. Michael Cahill and I had a common link in we were both "Tangent Men." Meaning in a conversation we often went off up the garden path before returning to the subject of a discussion. Cheers.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Looks like he as old Mikey and I would say "went off on a 'tangent' " hehe. Well done for a shorty. Michael Cahill and I had a common link in we were both "Tangent Men." Meaning in a conversation we often went off up the garden path before returning to the subject of a discussion. Cheers.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your comment and sixer, Geoff. Bless you. Bob
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Success, audition, words came more than realistic, full of feeling and appreciable for playing the act; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Success, audition, words came more than realistic, full of feeling and appreciable for playing the act; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Wow. This is a first for me. Having you review anything of mine is new but very much appreciated, my friend. : ) Bob
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi may be you still remember me. I always liked your style and the way you put things.very simple but forceful and meaning what you say.
A bit of despair here wth Girard and sort of disorientated as appears at the end.
I enjoy the write. I'll remember to catch up with the next one.
Bye, God bless
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi may be you still remember me. I always liked your style and the way you put things.very simple but forceful and meaning what you say.
A bit of despair here wth Girard and sort of disorientated as appears at the end.
I enjoy the write. I'll remember to catch up with the next one.
Bye, God bless
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Weell thank you, Benny. Yes I remember you very well. I see you have been posting agsin lately. I haven't reviewed your writing of late to be honest because you never promote it. I will be there when you do my friend. : ) Bob
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Bob,
Your well-chosen 100 words are as brilliant today, as they were when you wrote them. They take the reader on an quick 'journey' of an ill actor with humor to help us understand a moment of how illness affects one's life.
My best, Deb
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Bob,
Your well-chosen 100 words are as brilliant today, as they were when you wrote them. They take the reader on an quick 'journey' of an ill actor with humor to help us understand a moment of how illness affects one's life.
My best, Deb
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your review and the six stars. Bless you. : ) Bob
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You are welcome, Bob, and your stars are well deserved :) Deb
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: ) Bob
Comment from Alex Rosel
I loved this. Of course, the last sentence is the killer, and it caught me completely by surprised. It's a neatly constructed flash fiction piece.
Congratulations on the competition win :)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I loved this. Of course, the last sentence is the killer, and it caught me completely by surprised. It's a neatly constructed flash fiction piece.
Congratulations on the competition win :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Alex. I appreciate the review and the six stars too. Bless you. : ) Bob
Comment from rspoet
Hello Bob,
Congratulations on winning the contest. An excellent story with a very good surprise ending. There are probably many Girards who have utter similar words. They now appear as bloopers on TV or U tube.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hello Bob,
Congratulations on winning the contest. An excellent story with a very good surprise ending. There are probably many Girards who have utter similar words. They now appear as bloopers on TV or U tube.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Robert. Yes, this is an old joke, redone in story mode. Glad you liked it. : ) Bob
Comment from Dutchie
o yes, an extreme story it was Bob and very well written. It starts funny with the wig, then sad about the chemo but the end is hilarious. How did you get this together. Great job!!! Fia
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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o yes, an extreme story it was Bob and very well written. It starts funny with the wig, then sad about the chemo but the end is hilarious. How did you get this together. Great job!!! Fia
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you dear friend. This is actually an old joke (fifty years or more) that I simply incorporated into a story. Bless you, Fia. : ) Bob
ps. are you enjoying the book yet?
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I loved it, Bob. Yes I'm enjoying the book. Last week we had another heat wave again. Good weather to read the book in the shade?. :)Fia
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Good to hear it, my friend. Bob
