Audition
Girard always wanted to be an actor113 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Not that's funny! Even with the profanity.
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Anything less would be unrealistic. 'Gosh darn' just wouldn't do it.
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Obviously, Girard wasn't paying attention. hahahaha
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Not that's funny! Even with the profanity.
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Anything less would be unrealistic. 'Gosh darn' just wouldn't do it.
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Obviously, Girard wasn't paying attention. hahahaha
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I think you meant "now" that's funny, Yvonne. Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. : ) Bob
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Yes, I did!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, "like a dead Pekingese", he said.
That's funny right there, I don't care WHO you are!
Me thinks Girard may not be ready for Prime Time just yet.
Oh well, everything takes time and practice makes perfect, or so it's been said.
Hilarious stuff, Bob!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hahaha, "like a dead Pekingese", he said.
That's funny right there, I don't care WHO you are!
Me thinks Girard may not be ready for Prime Time just yet.
Oh well, everything takes time and practice makes perfect, or so it's been said.
Hilarious stuff, Bob!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hey buddy. How ya' been? Haven't seen you on here much of late. Glad you liked this one though. (love the arty stuff. Thanks. : ) Bob
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I'm off and on, Bob.
You're more than welcome, my friend.
~Deano
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Audition, is a hoot. I guess Girard's improvised line wasn't exactly what the director had in mind. There is a lot of extra information that deepens the character here, which is useful in understanding Girard's state of mind. The description of the wig sets the wickedly humorous tone for the reader. Love the last line; so funny.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This one-hundred-word story, Audition, is a hoot. I guess Girard's improvised line wasn't exactly what the director had in mind. There is a lot of extra information that deepens the character here, which is useful in understanding Girard's state of mind. The description of the wig sets the wickedly humorous tone for the reader. Love the last line; so funny.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Bill. so glad you liked this one and thanks for the six stars too. Bless you. : ) Bob
Comment from Gloria ....
HAHA, this is hilarious, Bob. I should say they stop writing these scripts with so many difficult to learn lines that just don't come off as natural. LOL.
I can see why this beauty won, it got a good laugh out of me.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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HAHA, this is hilarious, Bob. I should say they stop writing these scripts with so many difficult to learn lines that just don't come off as natural. LOL.
I can see why this beauty won, it got a good laugh out of me.
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Gloria. Thank you. : ) Bob
Comment from Zala Jam
The ending made me laugh, great job! Despite the brevity of the piece you still managed to convey a lot about the main character, establish a more sombre background and make the reader smile and relate to the main character. Excellent piece.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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The ending made me laugh, great job! Despite the brevity of the piece you still managed to convey a lot about the main character, establish a more sombre background and make the reader smile and relate to the main character. Excellent piece.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Zala. I appreciate this review. : ) Bob
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Typically excellent. wrote a short story about a twelve-year-old Carol getting her head stuck in a cannon. She was not pleased, but it got a lot of reviews.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Typically excellent. wrote a short story about a twelve-year-old Carol getting her head stuck in a cannon. She was not pleased, but it got a lot of reviews.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Thomas. Bob
Comment from karenina
When I am having a "down" day I admit I sometimes turn to You-Tube and inevitable type in "bloopers"--most often for a classic movie because to see those "idols" fall out of place and out of character makes me laugh. Your story did the same thing! --Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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When I am having a "down" day I admit I sometimes turn to You-Tube and inevitable type in "bloopers"--most often for a classic movie because to see those "idols" fall out of place and out of character makes me laugh. Your story did the same thing! --Karenina
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Karen. I am glad you enjoyed it. : ) Bob
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I did indeed!--Karenina
Comment from royowen
A most creative post Bob, the subtlety o delivery was excellent, the chemotherapeutic must have really jangled his nerves, you'd think he'd be impervious to a blast, but he found the right script to follow, we'll done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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A most creative post Bob, the subtlety o delivery was excellent, the chemotherapeutic must have really jangled his nerves, you'd think he'd be impervious to a blast, but he found the right script to follow, we'll done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Glad you liked it, Roy. : ) Bob
Comment from kahpot
Yes stage fright can blank out almost anything, except the reaction when a cannon roars, very well written and very deserving of your win, loved the ending****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Yes stage fright can blank out almost anything, except the reaction when a cannon roars, very well written and very deserving of your win, loved the ending****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, my friend. : ) Bob
Comment from Mia Twysted
I have been in plays before and at first, it was kind of scary. You plan and plan and rehearse and still when it is in the moment so many unsuspecting things can happen.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I have been in plays before and at first, it was kind of scary. You plan and plan and rehearse and still when it is in the moment so many unsuspecting things can happen.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this evidently, Mia. : ) Bob
