Audition
Girard always wanted to be an actor113 total reviews
Comment from light
Another winner 100 word dash. Looks like someone forgot his cue. Now that is classic stage fright. A fun read and very funny, with a surprise ending.
Elaine
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Another winner 100 word dash. Looks like someone forgot his cue. Now that is classic stage fright. A fun read and very funny, with a surprise ending.
Elaine
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Elaine. Glad you liked it. : ) Bob
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I have to confess, this is one of the best 100 word stories I've ever read. It's not easy to tell a complete story in such a limited format, but you pulled it off beautifully! This one deserved to win!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I have to confess, this is one of the best 100 word stories I've ever read. It's not easy to tell a complete story in such a limited format, but you pulled it off beautifully! This one deserved to win!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, my friend. I appreciate you and the six stars too. Bless you : ) Bob
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I hope you have a blessed day as well, Bob.
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: ) Bob
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:) Bob
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Thank you, Brennie : ) Bob
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Comment from shaffer40
I am laughing out loud. Like your other pieces I've read on here, this vignette is clever and perfectly presented. I've used up my six-star ratings this month, or I would have selected them here.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I am laughing out loud. Like your other pieces I've read on here, this vignette is clever and perfectly presented. I've used up my six-star ratings this month, or I would have selected them here.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Tamara. I appreciate your comment. : ) Bob
Comment from Rod A. White
LOL Me thinks ol' Jerry isn't quite cut out for acting. Seems much too nervous and distracted to be the next Mel Gibson or Tom Cruise. I suspect he may have even shite his britches! Bravo!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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LOL Me thinks ol' Jerry isn't quite cut out for acting. Seems much too nervous and distracted to be the next Mel Gibson or Tom Cruise. I suspect he may have even shite his britches! Bravo!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks a lot, Rod. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Bob
Comment from LisaMay
Methinks this Girard has an overdeveloped 'startle reflex' and a short memory, not such good attributes for an actor having to deal with cannons. Yours is a very funny story about the things that can go wrong in the theatre.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Methinks this Girard has an overdeveloped 'startle reflex' and a short memory, not such good attributes for an actor having to deal with cannons. Yours is a very funny story about the things that can go wrong in the theatre.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Lisa. I am glad ypou got to read this one. Bob
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Bob, this is a great flash fiction. It puts mine to shame (as well as most of the other ones I have read recently. Thanks for giving it new life so those who missed the first time get a chance to read it, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Bob, this is a great flash fiction. It puts mine to shame (as well as most of the other ones I have read recently. Thanks for giving it new life so those who missed the first time get a chance to read it, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Debbie. : ) Bob
Comment from tfawcus
This one brought a smile. It reminded me of the old joke about the boy who's lines in the school play were, "Hark, I hear a pistol shot." Muffed with predictable results.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This one brought a smile. It reminded me of the old joke about the boy who's lines in the school play were, "Hark, I hear a pistol shot." Muffed with predictable results.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Tony. Glad you liked it. Bob
Comment from Earl Corp
That was a good twist at the end. I didn't see that coming and I was beginning to wonder why you had put a language warning on it. Thanks for reviving bthis one it was fun. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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That was a good twist at the end. I didn't see that coming and I was beginning to wonder why you had put a language warning on it. Thanks for reviving bthis one it was fun. Very nice job.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Earl. Glad you liked it. : ) Bob
Comment from Tpa
Congratulations on winning that prompt. The ending was funny and I liked your description of his lips, always a pleasure of reading your work, able to learn a thing or two.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Congratulations on winning that prompt. The ending was funny and I liked your description of his lips, always a pleasure of reading your work, able to learn a thing or two.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Tom. glad you liked this one. : ) Bob
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Bob. I was interested in the "setting" of the story. The description of Girard was graphic and amusing. I laughed out loud when I read the wig looked like a "dead Pekingese." The last line brought another guffaw. Robert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi Bob. I was interested in the "setting" of the story. The description of Girard was graphic and amusing. I laughed out loud when I read the wig looked like a "dead Pekingese." The last line brought another guffaw. Robert
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi, Robert. So glad you liked it. : ) Bob
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It's a good read. Robert
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Thank you, my friend. Bob
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Thank you, my friend. Bob
