Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Chapter 3 Part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
80 total reviews
Comment from E.P. Thomas
You continue to improve upon your previous works, Barbara. This chapter, though romantic, was a definite page turner. Clean, crisp, and well-edited. Need to go back and catch up.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
  |
You continue to improve upon your previous works, Barbara. This chapter, though romantic, was a definite page turner. Clean, crisp, and well-edited. Need to go back and catch up.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Arkine
Well, so far so good. I'm wondering about those descriptions in the thoughts though. I don't know if I've ever guessed a guy's height or weight before. If I was interested, I guess I just didn't really care about those things. Just a thought.
Funny him polishing her nail. Nicely done! :)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
Well, so far so good. I'm wondering about those descriptions in the thoughts though. I don't know if I've ever guessed a guy's height or weight before. If I was interested, I guess I just didn't really care about those things. Just a thought.
Funny him polishing her nail. Nicely done! :)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Leigh Ann
This is a romantic story. I like what I've read here. Now I'll have to go back and read the previous chapters to catch up. I don't know how many stories I can keep up with on here at one time, but this one has peaked my interest. Good writing. Leigh Ann
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
This is a romantic story. I like what I've read here. Now I'll have to go back and read the previous chapters to catch up. I don't know how many stories I can keep up with on here at one time, but this one has peaked my interest. Good writing. Leigh Ann
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, oh, how I so love this man, Joe. (My first husband who passed away during the VietNam era was named Joe). He is such a protector and gentleman. I hope he's a keeper for Sara. Another wonderful chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
Barbara, oh, how I so love this man, Joe. (My first husband who passed away during the VietNam era was named Joe). He is such a protector and gentleman. I hope he's a keeper for Sara. Another wonderful chapter.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Sharkey
Love how the story is developing :) Wish there was a gentleman like Joe around my town, lol. As always, you make the scenes in your story seem real. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
Love how the story is developing :) Wish there was a gentleman like Joe around my town, lol. As always, you make the scenes in your story seem real. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review. I agree we could do with more Joes.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Another chapter that I found enjoyable and well written. Although I read with an editing eye, I saw nothing that needs revision.
I really liked this little thought:
At least it's not the little finger. The one she's wrapped me around.
Duane
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
barbara.wilkey,
Another chapter that I found enjoyable and well written. Although I read with an editing eye, I saw nothing that needs revision.
I really liked this little thought:
At least it's not the little finger. The one she's wrapped me around.
Duane
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.
Comment from bhogg
Col. Joe is a gentleman and a romantic to boot. A great addition, editing to your usual high standard.An excellent read.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
Col. Joe is a gentleman and a romantic to boot. A great addition, editing to your usual high standard.An excellent read.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Black-Saphire
I love these chapters! you have me completely captivated throughout every word, and i cannot wait to read the next chapter! Great job!!!
//Jade
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
 |
I love these chapters! you have me completely captivated throughout every word, and i cannot wait to read the next chapter! Great job!!!
//Jade
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you so much. This shocked me. Wow!!! You left me speechless.
Comment from zoocq
This has got to be the most beautiful love story I have read in a long time. No heavy sex, multiple partners, cuss words every other sentence. Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
This has got to be the most beautiful love story I have read in a long time. No heavy sex, multiple partners, cuss words every other sentence. Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from robbis4
Loved your writing I'm not usually someone who reads a great deal but I found myself wanting to read on, you have good pace to your writing and I was instantly drawn to your characters, had me wanting to know more , which of course is the aim of all good writing , well done thanks for sharing bob
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
|
Loved your writing I'm not usually someone who reads a great deal but I found myself wanting to read on, you have good pace to your writing and I was instantly drawn to your characters, had me wanting to know more , which of course is the aim of all good writing , well done thanks for sharing bob
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
-
Thank you for your kind review.
