Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Mommy and Daddy are Special!"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
5 total reviews
Comment from MyYiaYia
Cute, cute little poem. The 'mommy' text coloring was a bit light for me to see, but I managed. You might want to consider changing the color for those of us who have bad eyesight, LOL.
-who dwells from above.- I would change 'from' to 'up'-
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2010
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Cute, cute little poem. The 'mommy' text coloring was a bit light for me to see, but I managed. You might want to consider changing the color for those of us who have bad eyesight, LOL.
-who dwells from above.- I would change 'from' to 'up'-
Comment Written 12-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your comments and suggestons.
Comment from RADIO
Can appreciate poems as this one that you have
written for your daughter. I'm sure it went very
well. Excellent idea of loving thoughts and gratitude
for the great gift of life and love. My favorite poems
are those written for my children and Grandchildren.
Radio
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2010
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Can appreciate poems as this one that you have
written for your daughter. I'm sure it went very
well. Excellent idea of loving thoughts and gratitude
for the great gift of life and love. My favorite poems
are those written for my children and Grandchildren.
Radio
Comment Written 12-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2010
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Thank you very much for your thoughts and comments.
Comment from FredCollingwood
This is the first of yours I've read and I'm glad I did. It's great. this is what families are all about ... or at least they should be.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2010
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This is the first of yours I've read and I'm glad I did. It's great. this is what families are all about ... or at least they should be.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2010
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Comment from adewpearl
are Father - our Father
sending you hear - here
Your poem has good flow and strong rhyming couplets and sounds like it is from a child's point of view. I like the examples the child points out of all the good things Mommy and Daddy to for his life. Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2010
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are Father - our Father
sending you hear - here
Your poem has good flow and strong rhyming couplets and sounds like it is from a child's point of view. I like the examples the child points out of all the good things Mommy and Daddy to for his life. Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Brooke. I've already fixed the typos. Thanks for catching them. Appreciate your review as always.
Comment from LeeLongpre
"And we thank Heavenly Father for sending you hear." Hear should be here.
Other wise this was really good. I enjoyed it. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2010
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"And we thank Heavenly Father for sending you hear." Hear should be here.
Other wise this was really good. I enjoyed it. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2010
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I've already reviewed and changed the typo. Thank you so much for your critique, comments and hope to do better by you for better rating next time.
