The Minute Poem
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Comment from Sonjalee
A good , thought provoking poem. Somehow I feel the baby cubs are thinking about 2 things, eating and playing. I personally so not think they can think critically-HA. But wild animals are smart especially if they have survived for a long while.
Good example of minute.
Great poem>
How do you come up with a poem so frequently?
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2011
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A good , thought provoking poem. Somehow I feel the baby cubs are thinking about 2 things, eating and playing. I personally so not think they can think critically-HA. But wild animals are smart especially if they have survived for a long while.
Good example of minute.
Great poem>
How do you come up with a poem so frequently?
Comment Written 04-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2011
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Sonjalee, thank you so very much. As for ideas, I will look through fan art for inspiration, I will troll my memories, sometimes I'll just come up with a starting line - there are many ways to start, but lots of times it takes work to come up with something - I'm not sitting on a waiting list of ideas, though I wish I were. LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from rudywalsh
Another beautiful poem well and truly written. a perfect little poem explaining in poetic detail the destiny and domain of the lion and it's cubs.
Something I am a great believer in, Destiny.
Thanks for the pleasure Brooke, take care and have a lovely day. Rudy.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Another beautiful poem well and truly written. a perfect little poem explaining in poetic detail the destiny and domain of the lion and it's cubs.
Something I am a great believer in, Destiny.
Thanks for the pleasure Brooke, take care and have a lovely day. Rudy.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Rudy, for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from gramalot8
Adewpearl, very nice minute poem. I feel that the lion definitely knows it's statue in the wild kingdom. If I'm not mistaken, are they not called "A Pride" when there is a group of them together. That alone says it all. A very proud animal indeed. Wonderful imagery. Very nice picture choice also.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Adewpearl, very nice minute poem. I feel that the lion definitely knows it's statue in the wild kingdom. If I'm not mistaken, are they not called "A Pride" when there is a group of them together. That alone says it all. A very proud animal indeed. Wonderful imagery. Very nice picture choice also.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Thank you, my friend : -) Yes, they are called a pride as a group :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke You minute poems are just great.Lovely thoughts in this poem. Your rhyming is pur-fect. Great choice of artwork.
Cheers GAye
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Hi Brooke You minute poems are just great.Lovely thoughts in this poem. Your rhyming is pur-fect. Great choice of artwork.
Cheers GAye
Comment Written 30-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Thank you, Gaye. So glad you are enjoying the minute poems :-) Brooke
Comment from azierk
I take it you like animals anyway good poem again I would like to believe that shortly after birth they begin to mold into there calling kind of like us.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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I take it you like animals anyway good poem again I would like to believe that shortly after birth they begin to mold into there calling kind of like us.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2010
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Thank you, azierk. I appreciate your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from El.Marjie
So how many years have you been writing a poem a day? Is that something new, or old; the habit? I enjoyed reading and thinking about your minute poem, Destiny. Interesting questions you raised, but of course I believe they do it by instinct and that instinct was given to them by God. In any case, they're regal creatures and worthy of admirations. Another great poem for your collection. God bless! Marjie
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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So how many years have you been writing a poem a day? Is that something new, or old; the habit? I enjoyed reading and thinking about your minute poem, Destiny. Interesting questions you raised, but of course I believe they do it by instinct and that instinct was given to them by God. In any case, they're regal creatures and worthy of admirations. Another great poem for your collection. God bless! Marjie
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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One a day is just a habit since I joined FanStory, so two years :-)
Thanks, Marjie. Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Good questions, Brooke. At what point do the powerful realize they are born to power? "Or is ascent to regal throne once they are grown, a fate assigned, far from their minds?" Very thought provoking questions. Nice rhyme and rhythm, too. Good stuff, Brooke.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Good questions, Brooke. At what point do the powerful realize they are born to power? "Or is ascent to regal throne once they are grown, a fate assigned, far from their minds?" Very thought provoking questions. Nice rhyme and rhythm, too. Good stuff, Brooke.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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so pleased you found this provocative - thanks, Adrienne :-) Brooke
Comment from skye
What great deep contemplative questions...
Who would know, or wonder, and then how to find out.
Wonderful poem about nature and its mysteries.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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What great deep contemplative questions...
Who would know, or wonder, and then how to find out.
Wonderful poem about nature and its mysteries.
Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Skye, thank you :-) Glad you found meaning in this :-) Brooke
Comment from patmedium
Brooke, 'tis but a fate assigned, far from their minds!
This is, as usual, a wee poem which leaves me with a wqarm heart and a broad smile. Pat. xx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Brooke, 'tis but a fate assigned, far from their minds!
This is, as usual, a wee poem which leaves me with a wqarm heart and a broad smile. Pat. xx
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Thank you, Pat. So glad you enjoyed. Brooke :-)
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Comment from Hitcher
Nice thought provoking little poem Brooke, they know nothing! They are born to play and wrestle their way through their youth just like us or most of us anyway, I wouldn't of had it any other way.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Nice thought provoking little poem Brooke, they know nothing! They are born to play and wrestle their way through their youth just like us or most of us anyway, I wouldn't of had it any other way.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Thanks, Hitch - good to see you :-) Brooke
