Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Faith Keeps Me Strong"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
16 total reviews
Comment from idnami
This is a nice acrostic. It expresses very nicely the message you want to convey in a convincing child's voice. How old is your granddaughter?
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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This is a nice acrostic. It expresses very nicely the message you want to convey in a convincing child's voice. How old is your granddaughter?
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. Granddaughter is 11 yrs. old and did a very good job. Jerri
Comment from c_lucas
A very simple, child-like poem which is well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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A very simple, child-like poem which is well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and rating. Jerri
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You're welcome.
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Very beautiful little poem! I'll bet your granddaughter was adorable reciting this! Lovely words, great rhythm and flow. Great message for all. Thanks for sharing! Betty
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Very beautiful little poem! I'll bet your granddaughter was adorable reciting this! Lovely words, great rhythm and flow. Great message for all. Thanks for sharing! Betty
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Thank you, Betty, for your wonderful comments. Granddaughter did am awesome job. Jerri
Comment from Joan E.
I am pleased to learn that your poem helped your granddaughter in presenting her talk. I admired your declaration of faith in rhyme. The picture you chose resonated with your work.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I am pleased to learn that your poem helped your granddaughter in presenting her talk. I admired your declaration of faith in rhyme. The picture you chose resonated with your work.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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As always, thank you for your wonderful comments. Jerri
Comment from InHisownwrite
A very simple child-like look at faith....
Just knowing what you should do.....
Going down the right path....
Love: (heading towards where I know I can be)
That's what faith is all about... Good job! Bryan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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A very simple child-like look at faith....
Just knowing what you should do.....
Going down the right path....
Love: (heading towards where I know I can be)
That's what faith is all about... Good job! Bryan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your comments.
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Thank you for yours... Bryan
Comment from Kingsland
This piece just oozes poetic parlance. I think you have done a damn good job of writing this free flowing verse. It has a very positive message in it poetic words of artistry. This was just a delight to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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This piece just oozes poetic parlance. I think you have done a damn good job of writing this free flowing verse. It has a very positive message in it poetic words of artistry. This was just a delight to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you so much for your comments and rating.
Comment from pugrpoems
This is very finely crafted. I like the acrostic of faith. The other problem I see is that the syllable count in your acrostic is varied, and uneven. Great job!!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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This is very finely crafted. I like the acrostic of faith. The other problem I see is that the syllable count in your acrostic is varied, and uneven. Great job!!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your comments. I'll revisit the acrostic syllable count.
Comment from NadineM
This is a great child's poem on faith and God. This is something even a young child could memorize and say as part of their prayers!
What wonderful gifts you have blessed your granddaughter with, first your own faith and Christian example, and now this writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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This is a great child's poem on faith and God. This is something even a young child could memorize and say as part of their prayers!
What wonderful gifts you have blessed your granddaughter with, first your own faith and Christian example, and now this writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful review and rating.
Comment from NadiaScrieva
This is a sweet little poem, and you chose a lovely photo to accompany it. Nice use of the acrostic style and a tone of gratitude and cheerful appreciation.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Regards,
Nadia
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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This is a sweet little poem, and you chose a lovely photo to accompany it. Nice use of the acrostic style and a tone of gratitude and cheerful appreciation.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Regards,
Nadia
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from jwlee211
I like this poem. They say the faith of a child is the strongest in the world. Great word choice and I like the structure of this poem
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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I like this poem. They say the faith of a child is the strongest in the world. Great word choice and I like the structure of this poem
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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thank you for your comments and rating.
