He was Her Husband
He allowed her to keep her dignity70 total reviews
Comment from bowls
I have to tell you, by the time I finished reading this I had chills and a tear running down my cheek. It was simply beautiful. You write in such a natural, sincere manner, as when you say you'll get back to your story. Do you remember that very old TV show "I Remember Mama"? There was always a narrator in the background telling the story from her point of view as the daughter. Your style reminds me very much of that. Thanks for a great read and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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I have to tell you, by the time I finished reading this I had chills and a tear running down my cheek. It was simply beautiful. You write in such a natural, sincere manner, as when you say you'll get back to your story. Do you remember that very old TV show "I Remember Mama"? There was always a narrator in the background telling the story from her point of view as the daughter. Your style reminds me very much of that. Thanks for a great read and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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thank you so very much. Your words and rating have made my day! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and, yes, I do remember the TV show. I'm flattered that my style reminded you of it. ann
Comment from kylielynn
A nice capture of the time. There are not many couples like that anymore. You were truly blessed. It drew me in well to feel as if I were sitting there, too. Good job.
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A nice capture of the time. There are not many couples like that anymore. You were truly blessed. It drew me in well to feel as if I were sitting there, too. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my story and took the time to let me know. thanks so much. ann
Comment from menachem
Very touching! But it doesn't sound like a story about your father, it sounds like a story about your parents. And they BOTH sound like wonderful people. It seems you still miss her very much.
I'm sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Very touching! But it doesn't sound like a story about your father, it sounds like a story about your parents. And they BOTH sound like wonderful people. It seems you still miss her very much.
I'm sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my story. You may be right in that it is a story about my parents. I do miss both of them very much. ann
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You're welcome.
And, good luck.
Comment from Kellytr
Annumuma, A beautiful story and a wonderful tribute to your dad. How fortunate for you that you managed to put it all together when you matured - the understanding of how this good man respected your mum's dignity. Thanks for sharing. Kelly
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Annumuma, A beautiful story and a wonderful tribute to your dad. How fortunate for you that you managed to put it all together when you matured - the understanding of how this good man respected your mum's dignity. Thanks for sharing. Kelly
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my story and the six stars makes my day. I appreciate your support very much. Thank you. ann
Comment from JW
Wow! What a touching story. Not only could you vividly see the scene before you, but you could feel the love your parents shared.
Great job. Jonathon
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Wow! What a touching story. Not only could you vividly see the scene before you, but you could feel the love your parents shared.
Great job. Jonathon
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Six lovely shiny stars! How very generous and kind of you. I appreciate your reading my story and taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it. ann
Comment from Ann Smith
What a sweet picture of love and romance. Even though your mother was sick your daddy still knew how to love and romance her. That was part of the idea of allowing her to still have her dignity. She was his wife until the end. You are lucky to have such wonderful parents. The details and imagery of that time is very clear and I can hear the voices on the porch now. Good luck with the contest. ann
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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What a sweet picture of love and romance. Even though your mother was sick your daddy still knew how to love and romance her. That was part of the idea of allowing her to still have her dignity. She was his wife until the end. You are lucky to have such wonderful parents. The details and imagery of that time is very clear and I can hear the voices on the porch now. Good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much for your time in reading and reviewing my story. I appreciate your generous comments and am so glad you enjoyed the story ann
Comment from Nicky B
Things never appear as they seem. Now in retrospect you can see it was your father allowing your mother the dignity to be the wife and mother she was. A poignant story. Nick.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Things never appear as they seem. Now in retrospect you can see it was your father allowing your mother the dignity to be the wife and mother she was. A poignant story. Nick.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate. ann
Comment from idnami
This is a wonderful, moving story, and well told. Of course your mom would prefer that he take no notice of her illness. Of course he DID take notice and modified his actions accordingly in a considerate, gentlemanly way. And of course a young child wouldn't understand. Thank you so much for this glimpse into a wonderful marriage.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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This is a wonderful, moving story, and well told. Of course your mom would prefer that he take no notice of her illness. Of course he DID take notice and modified his actions accordingly in a considerate, gentlemanly way. And of course a young child wouldn't understand. Thank you so much for this glimpse into a wonderful marriage.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and for the generous review. I appreciate your time in sharing both. ann
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a humanitarian overtone. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Everyone faces the end in their own way. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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This is very well written with a humanitarian overtone. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Everyone faces the end in their own way. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate the generous review and good luck wishes. ann
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You're welcome, Ann. Charlie
Comment from phaedra
An exceptional story about your family. I liked the way he let your mother keep her self respect. Enjoy the nap part your father was very in toon with the ebb and flow of your mothers health issues.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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An exceptional story about your family. I liked the way he let your mother keep her self respect. Enjoy the nap part your father was very in toon with the ebb and flow of your mothers health issues.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2010
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Six stars make my day and I'm so very appreciative. I'm grateful for your generousity and pleased you enjoyed my story. ann
