He was Her Husband
He allowed her to keep her dignity70 total reviews
Comment from newbeginning
What a beautiful story, told with tenderness and the understanding of years. They obviously had a wonderful caring and mutually respectful relationship.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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What a beautiful story, told with tenderness and the understanding of years. They obviously had a wonderful caring and mutually respectful relationship.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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What a nice thing to say! I don't get to visit fanstory as much as I once did and to check in to find a 6 star rating really makes my day. Thank you so very, very much. ann
Comment from skye
Tender, filled with love and the joy of marriage that overcame illness and despair.
Your writing brings it alive. You use words wonderfully well in setting the stage and creating the scene.
Very very well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Tender, filled with love and the joy of marriage that overcame illness and despair.
Your writing brings it alive. You use words wonderfully well in setting the stage and creating the scene.
Very very well done.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Thank you so very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ann
Comment from 60236
This is SO sweet, and makes me want to try harder to make my marriage just that much better. It's the FEELING-not the looking-so very true. Thank you for this glimpse of your father.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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This is SO sweet, and makes me want to try harder to make my marriage just that much better. It's the FEELING-not the looking-so very true. Thank you for this glimpse of your father.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Thank you very much. My dad was a complicated man, but aren't we all! ann
Comment from SUSKI
When I started reading your piece the dialogue seemed insignificant. That changed quickly and I realized how signifcant the insignificant can be. You've captured your parents love for each other so well and your father's specialness. The picture is a nice added touch.
It's a moving, weel written story.
SUSKI
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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When I started reading your piece the dialogue seemed insignificant. That changed quickly and I realized how signifcant the insignificant can be. You've captured your parents love for each other so well and your father's specialness. The picture is a nice added touch.
It's a moving, weel written story.
SUSKI
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much! ann
Comment from IndianaIrish
And how he deserved your admiration, too. This is a wonderfully moving story, Annmuma, and you brought the love and tenderness of your dad to the reader. best wishes.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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And how he deserved your admiration, too. This is a wonderfully moving story, Annmuma, and you brought the love and tenderness of your dad to the reader. best wishes.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much! ann
Comment from kellyolsen
My, oh my, you are a beautifully gifted storyteller. I only wish I could have heard you read it aloud, as I am sure all the character and dialect that is evident in your writing would spring to life off the page. It is one story I can relate to. Even though this was a couple of generations ago, I am a wife who makes a point of looking good for my husband when he gets home, even on days my rheumatoid arthritis gets the best of me. And I love you you painted such a loving husband who I am sure struggled to make sure his dying wife maintained her dignity. Excellent read.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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My, oh my, you are a beautifully gifted storyteller. I only wish I could have heard you read it aloud, as I am sure all the character and dialect that is evident in your writing would spring to life off the page. It is one story I can relate to. Even though this was a couple of generations ago, I am a wife who makes a point of looking good for my husband when he gets home, even on days my rheumatoid arthritis gets the best of me. And I love you you painted such a loving husband who I am sure struggled to make sure his dying wife maintained her dignity. Excellent read.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for a generous review and for sharing your own experience with me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. ann
Comment from jlsavell
Annmuma, this is such a moving story. it gave me goose bumps and brought tears to my eyes. The eyes of a child never quite understands the interactions nor appreciates the wisdom of love's actions, until we reach a emotional level of understanding. You have conveyed this quite well in your moving emotive story. Your dad must have been such a selfless, loving ,wise, compassionate person and your mom..how beautiful and wise she was..thank you for sharing..jlsavell
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Annmuma, this is such a moving story. it gave me goose bumps and brought tears to my eyes. The eyes of a child never quite understands the interactions nor appreciates the wisdom of love's actions, until we reach a emotional level of understanding. You have conveyed this quite well in your moving emotive story. Your dad must have been such a selfless, loving ,wise, compassionate person and your mom..how beautiful and wise she was..thank you for sharing..jlsavell
Comment Written 17-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Thank you for such a kind and generous review. Were my dad still living, he would have had his 115 birthday last Sunday. Even though it was a somewhat sad summer, some of my favorite memories come from that summer. I love to take them out now and then and enjoy them one more time. ann
Comment from sgalletti
Beautifully written story Ann that brought tears to my eyes. Read it twice and cried even more. My mother died when she was 44 of colon cancer. She was the mother of four and the love of my father's life (they married when they were 19!). I watched my father fall apart as she was dying of this dreadful disease. And, she always remained strong for all of us...Poignant piece...Sue
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Beautifully written story Ann that brought tears to my eyes. Read it twice and cried even more. My mother died when she was 44 of colon cancer. She was the mother of four and the love of my father's life (they married when they were 19!). I watched my father fall apart as she was dying of this dreadful disease. And, she always remained strong for all of us...Poignant piece...Sue
Comment Written 17-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Reading your review brought tears to my eyes. It is difficult to watch one's mom die and one's parents' relationship struggle as they say good-bye. The blessing is that we are all stronger for it and had the opportunity to learn so much from the experience. (Personally, I forego that learning, if given the option. lol) thanks so much, Sue, for reading and commenting. ann
Comment from daniela.albu
It is so impressive the dignity with which this couple faced illness and ultimately, the death of one of them. The way he treats her says everything about the tremendous love of your mom and dad. You managed to freeze the moment of those summer afternoons on the porch with gifted words:
" often settled on the top step to listen as they chatted. Even at that young age, I marveled at how Mama blossomed when Daddy talked with her. They discussed politics, the neighbors, the railroad, the cows, the chickens, whether or not they should put in a fall garden and the next possible labor strike which always seemed to be looming on the horizon. "
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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It is so impressive the dignity with which this couple faced illness and ultimately, the death of one of them. The way he treats her says everything about the tremendous love of your mom and dad. You managed to freeze the moment of those summer afternoons on the porch with gifted words:
" often settled on the top step to listen as they chatted. Even at that young age, I marveled at how Mama blossomed when Daddy talked with her. They discussed politics, the neighbors, the railroad, the cows, the chickens, whether or not they should put in a fall garden and the next possible labor strike which always seemed to be looming on the horizon. "
Comment Written 17-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2010
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Thanks so very much. I appreciate your reading and your generous review. ann
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Nice presentation you have here--memorable and emotional. I like the photo you've chosen to display, drawing forth the binging of a new generation. Well written story for the contest. Good luck.
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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Nice presentation you have here--memorable and emotional. I like the photo you've chosen to display, drawing forth the binging of a new generation. Well written story for the contest. Good luck.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time and generous review. ann
