Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Morther Rabbit's Surprise"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
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Comment from adewpearl
Gramalot, what a delightful story that shows the matter of conscience this little rabbit had to grapple with - I like the gentle way his mother taught him this lesson, allowing him to decide on his own to do the right thing based on the morals she has instilled in him. :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2010
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Gramalot, what a delightful story that shows the matter of conscience this little rabbit had to grapple with - I like the gentle way his mother taught him this lesson, allowing him to decide on his own to do the right thing based on the morals she has instilled in him. :-) Brooke
Comment Written 12-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Alexandra.Obreja
What a sweet children story. I think this is the kind that should be read to children before bedtime. It teaches the children to be good and if they are they shall receive something in return.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Alex
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2010
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What a sweet children story. I think this is the kind that should be read to children before bedtime. It teaches the children to be good and if they are they shall receive something in return.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Alex
Comment Written 12-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your comments. I hoped it would be well received, with it being rabbits and not real kids.
Comment from jwlee211
great children's story. The temptation had to be great and I am glad that he turned away from it. Great descriptions and you build the characters well.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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great children's story. The temptation had to be great and I am glad that he turned away from it. Great descriptions and you build the characters well.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is such a wonderful story. It teaches good behavior in such a delightful way. There is a couple of mistakes you might want to edit. One is in the last sentence. It says, "He wanted to always be ready for any other surprises the could come from Mother Rabbit. I think you meant "that could come" instead of "the." You might just want to take a quick look at it. It is such a great children story. It is descriptive and expressive which makes for an excellent read. God bless you!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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This is such a wonderful story. It teaches good behavior in such a delightful way. There is a couple of mistakes you might want to edit. One is in the last sentence. It says, "He wanted to always be ready for any other surprises the could come from Mother Rabbit. I think you meant "that could come" instead of "the." You might just want to take a quick look at it. It is such a great children story. It is descriptive and expressive which makes for an excellent read. God bless you!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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Thank you. I had just finished fixing the typos you mentioned. Thank for your kind remarks and rating.
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You are very welcome. I hope you have a blessed day. Marilyn
