Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Rosa"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
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Comment from Gideon Roth
Excellent job on this. I think you have a natural flow with the dialogue and the character development done on this makes for believable characters. Good job...Gideon
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Excellent job on this. I think you have a natural flow with the dialogue and the character development done on this makes for believable characters. Good job...Gideon
Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much. I really felt this as I wrote it and like I said before, I've seen this first hand. Just "people watching" is where I get a lot of my inspirations.
Comment from overthemoon
Very well written giving a wonderful insight into the way children can be affected even traumatised having to move from their native country and live in a different land a new culture and language. I hadn't given it a thought until reading your work,thanks for awaking me to this situation.
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Very well written giving a wonderful insight into the way children can be affected even traumatised having to move from their native country and live in a different land a new culture and language. I hadn't given it a thought until reading your work,thanks for awaking me to this situation.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much for your comment. This is my first writing for FanStory and I hope to do more.
