Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Lest we Forget"A book of Poetry & Writing
118 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Knowing we would always go
a little further than requested
It is my honor to read this write and to be able to say to you, "Thank you!!!" You've touched my heart with this write and I know you've made it easier and better just for being wo you are.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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Knowing we would always go
a little further than requested
It is my honor to read this write and to be able to say to you, "Thank you!!!" You've touched my heart with this write and I know you've made it easier and better just for being wo you are.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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thank you for reading
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My deepest pleasure, Deepwater!!!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very well written and meaningful piece. These few words say an awful lot. We need to recognize our soldiers and take care of them after they return. Flows well.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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This is a very well written and meaningful piece. These few words say an awful lot. We need to recognize our soldiers and take care of them after they return. Flows well.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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thank you
Comment from ophelia91380
Wow. My father, grandfather and uncles were soldiers, and my brother and two cousins are currently soldiers. The second line and third line I find to be the most powerful. This poem reminds me of my brother who has decided to make the military his career and has already served two tours in Iraq. As a very close sister, I can look into his eyes and see this entire poem beaming out. Bravo.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2010
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Wow. My father, grandfather and uncles were soldiers, and my brother and two cousins are currently soldiers. The second line and third line I find to be the most powerful. This poem reminds me of my brother who has decided to make the military his career and has already served two tours in Iraq. As a very close sister, I can look into his eyes and see this entire poem beaming out. Bravo.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments and revire ophelia
Comment from Vicwhiskey
Thanks for the poem deepwater, always good to see fellow servicemen on the site. Hope that it didn't take you too far and that your boots found home safe and sound. VW
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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Thanks for the poem deepwater, always good to see fellow servicemen on the site. Hope that it didn't take you too far and that your boots found home safe and sound. VW
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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safe hmmm don't know about sound VW but working on that with my writing thanks Gary
Comment from hfriscia
This diffenetly a good heartfelt poem about our veterns...The flow is good and easy to read...You did a great with piece...
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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This diffenetly a good heartfelt poem about our veterns...The flow is good and easy to read...You did a great with piece...
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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thank you hfriscia
Comment from skye
There is never one that is forgotten, who should not be revered for bravery, for service, for great sacrifice.
Excellent poem, showing how each one gives everything for our freedoms.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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There is never one that is forgotten, who should not be revered for bravery, for service, for great sacrifice.
Excellent poem, showing how each one gives everything for our freedoms.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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welcome Skye and thanks for reading
Comment from sugarfish
This is a very powerful poem and I enjoyed reading it very much. You've done an excellent job of taking something so profound and putting it into words. There is not one line that I would change in this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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This is a very powerful poem and I enjoyed reading it very much. You've done an excellent job of taking something so profound and putting it into words. There is not one line that I would change in this poem.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you sugarfish
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi DW. This is another interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry. Yuo have a great talent for writng this genre of poetry
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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Hi DW. This is another interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry. Yuo have a great talent for writng this genre of poetry
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Wendy
Comment from Razz
May me never forget...to forget is to be cursed.
May all our servicemen and women and all their families and loved ones be forever honored and blessed.
Thank you for your service and this beautiful reminder.
Have a blessed day.
Razz
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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May me never forget...to forget is to be cursed.
May all our servicemen and women and all their families and loved ones be forever honored and blessed.
Thank you for your service and this beautiful reminder.
Have a blessed day.
Razz
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments Razz and for the 6 stars Gary
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi deepwater,
You're right, old warriors, like old war horses, simply fade away into the background until the politicos find something else to call upon the latest generation to fight for. Kipling's poem "Tommy Atkins" says it all.
Patrick
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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Hi deepwater,
You're right, old warriors, like old war horses, simply fade away into the background until the politicos find something else to call upon the latest generation to fight for. Kipling's poem "Tommy Atkins" says it all.
Patrick
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thanks for reviewing Patrick
