Writings From the Heart
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Comment from jadapenn
I liked your thoughts in this poem, Deepwater. Crossing heavens or earth to defend your families and friends was a choice you make. You walked the extra mile.
But I still feel sorry for all those who walked their young lives into oblivion.
Well penned. luv jada
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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I liked your thoughts in this poem, Deepwater. Crossing heavens or earth to defend your families and friends was a choice you make. You walked the extra mile.
But I still feel sorry for all those who walked their young lives into oblivion.
Well penned. luv jada
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you Jad for your welcome comments GW
Comment from M. Karol
I am sure, these are the sentiments that keep people in adverse conditions to stake their lives for the country.
Short poem, showcasing emotions of courage and sacrifice.
Madhvi
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I am sure, these are the sentiments that keep people in adverse conditions to stake their lives for the country.
Short poem, showcasing emotions of courage and sacrifice.
Madhvi
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for the comments Madhvi
Comment from josejodar
Great poem!i ve enjoyed a lot the reading. It is short but intense, specially the last verse: brothers in arms. Congratulations and greetings. jose
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Great poem!i ve enjoyed a lot the reading. It is short but intense, specially the last verse: brothers in arms. Congratulations and greetings. jose
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comment Jose
Comment from thequillman
deepwater. You have such a way of making the fallen heroes remembered so clearly, within our hearts. I wasn't certain if "Lifes" should read "lives." Good job as always. quill.
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deepwater. You have such a way of making the fallen heroes remembered so clearly, within our hearts. I wasn't certain if "Lifes" should read "lives." Good job as always. quill.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
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thank you quill for your welcome comments Gary
Comment from Leigh Ann
This is very touching and feels of personal experience. I am so proud of all who join the armed forces. Whether we like war or not, we need protection, and those who volunteer to protect or country deserves the utmost respect. Great writing as usual. Leigh Ann
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This is very touching and feels of personal experience. I am so proud of all who join the armed forces. Whether we like war or not, we need protection, and those who volunteer to protect or country deserves the utmost respect. Great writing as usual. Leigh Ann
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments Leigh Ann Gary
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Another beautiful, deep and meaningful writing. Perfect for Memorial Day. Always enjoy your poetry deepwater! Perfect drawing too! Thanks for sharing! Betty
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Another beautiful, deep and meaningful writing. Perfect for Memorial Day. Always enjoy your poetry deepwater! Perfect drawing too! Thanks for sharing! Betty
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
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your welcome and thank you for your welcome comments Betty
Comment from sibhus
Great thoughts wrapped in such wonderful words. This simple poem touchs the heart with it's truth and sincerity. You have put ringing truths a wonderfully elegant way. Great poem.
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Great thoughts wrapped in such wonderful words. This simple poem touchs the heart with it's truth and sincerity. You have put ringing truths a wonderfully elegant way. Great poem.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading sibhus Gary
Comment from grassroots08
forsaken life's
forsaken lives
that our life was a choice we made
that our way was a choice we made
YOU HAD JUST USED THE WORD LIFE, SO IT'S BEST TO CHANGE IT UP IF WE CAN.
This was a warm and personal piece that tells a story that most (I Hope) can relate to. Cheers, Great job and the cartoon is a delightful addition to it. Cheers, Don
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forsaken life's
forsaken lives
that our life was a choice we made
that our way was a choice we made
YOU HAD JUST USED THE WORD LIFE, SO IT'S BEST TO CHANGE IT UP IF WE CAN.
This was a warm and personal piece that tells a story that most (I Hope) can relate to. Cheers, Great job and the cartoon is a delightful addition to it. Cheers, Don
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you again for the comments which i have changed Don and for the 6 stars please revisit and let me know is you think this will work ok Gary
Comment from knowledge
This is very well done. It is an ode to our fallen and living soldiers. Those who have and would give their life for ours and others freedom.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
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This is very well done. It is an ode to our fallen and living soldiers. Those who have and would give their life for ours and others freedom.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading Knowledge
Comment from honeytree
We will remember them. Unfortunately our men and women, are still fighting to protect life within our world.
Man has not learn't to live in peace. Their is to much hatred within our world, that should be replaced with love.
Great art work and writing.
Honeytree.
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We will remember them. Unfortunately our men and women, are still fighting to protect life within our world.
Man has not learn't to live in peace. Their is to much hatred within our world, that should be replaced with love.
Great art work and writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you Honey
