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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Ghosterb
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I love this tribute to the Veterans that have sacrificed so much for our country!
I really like your wording and the structure of your poem.
Very nicely done my friend!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
    thank you
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
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A most beneficially received version of what it feels like to be a committed soldier. No other way could be represented to effectively reveal the undying conviction honorably held among the brotherhood of comrades in arms.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
    thank you
reply by Paula Andrea Pyle on 12-Nov-2010
    yes.
Comment from RKagan
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So true, this poem is. It is a lovely tribute to the soliders. This close to Veterans Day , it is a good time to take notice of all that the military does for us.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
    thanks RK
Comment from miajaffri
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A nice tribute to the veterans, brothers in arms.
Unfortunately, there will always be wars and you say this
...we fade away until the next generation is called upon
for duty.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
    thank you
Comment from Alan K Pease
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I don't think we ever forget the dead for war makes enemies for itself and patriotism is not the only way we share grief, but the way we can express our own responsibilities for the situations that lead to it.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
    thanks
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written and an excellent tribute to those who served. Some paid the ultimate price. Your poem expresses the sentiments of all. Good job.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
    thank you
reply by c_lucas on 12-Nov-2010
    You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Magics02
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Just a fine piece of art here on this day Veterans Day. I loved the image your words provoked in my soul and want to tell you that this is great. Blessings to you and all our soldiers.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
    thank you
reply by Magics02 on 11-Nov-2010
    You are so welcome poet:)
Comment from Majicman
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This poem supports your other ones in message and beauty. It's Remembrance Day in Canada and I'm enjoying reading your poems about the people who made this place free to live. Thanks.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


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    thank you
Comment from Cedar
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Very well said on this Veterans Day. So many paid
the ultimate price fighting to make this world a better place to live and in my opinion we always will. It's
just mankinds nature to be constantly at war with each other.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2010


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    thank you
Comment from parisaboyd
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I loved this So many have given their lives for our freedom, over centuries,we must not forget we must give thanks and homage to our soldiers, Thank you for writing such a strong piece

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
    thank you for reading