Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Connie C
Once again I am taken with your poetry. My daughter recently broke it off with her long-time cowboy because she didn't think she would be happy as a cowboy's wife. It is sad because they do love each other. I often show her your poetry. This one especially hits home. I do see one tiny error in your poem though. There should be no apostrophe in the word "thing's" since it is plural, not possessive. (Sorry--that's the ex-English teacher in me.) Nice work once again! Connie C
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Once again I am taken with your poetry. My daughter recently broke it off with her long-time cowboy because she didn't think she would be happy as a cowboy's wife. It is sad because they do love each other. I often show her your poetry. This one especially hits home. I do see one tiny error in your poem though. There should be no apostrophe in the word "thing's" since it is plural, not possessive. (Sorry--that's the ex-English teacher in me.) Nice work once again! Connie C
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thank you Connie i need to send you my writing befor i post it, do you need a job...smiling Gary
Comment from Judian James
I didn't realize a "cowgirl" meant wife and mother! I thought "cowgirl" meant she rides the range too. Although he's away for long periods, on the range I presume, why are "her fancy ways long gone with age" ending? Plus, if she's running around after kids, how old can she be? Well rhymed, but I didn't really get this one DW. Sorry
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I didn't realize a "cowgirl" meant wife and mother! I thought "cowgirl" meant she rides the range too. Although he's away for long periods, on the range I presume, why are "her fancy ways long gone with age" ending? Plus, if she's running around after kids, how old can she be? Well rhymed, but I didn't really get this one DW. Sorry
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thats ok and thanks for reading judian
Comment from Deejharrington
I wonder if she would trade it for the world of fancy living? It is a hard life. Of that I have no doubt. But I would think the trade-offs would be enough. A very good story told in verse.
dj
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I wonder if she would trade it for the world of fancy living? It is a hard life. Of that I have no doubt. But I would think the trade-offs would be enough. A very good story told in verse.
dj
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you D J
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
Yes indeed, the modern cowgirl faces a much different lifestyle than her counterpart of the past. This line is especially significant:
How sweet it was to think of thing's he promised they would do
Just a note: In that line 'thing's' should be 'things'.
Duane
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deepwater,
Yes indeed, the modern cowgirl faces a much different lifestyle than her counterpart of the past. This line is especially significant:
How sweet it was to think of thing's he promised they would do
Just a note: In that line 'thing's' should be 'things'.
Duane
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thanks dport for the comment and reading i will change
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I like this, Gary - you
definitely have a unique
style of your own -- I
see you are making your
lines a little shorter,
which does help the flow.
think of thing's
think of things
Most enjoyable, my friend.
Margaret.
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I like this, Gary - you
definitely have a unique
style of your own -- I
see you are making your
lines a little shorter,
which does help the flow.
think of thing's
think of things
Most enjoyable, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you Margaret for reading this don't know about unique just a old cowboy with no gummer or spelling
Comment from ulster3
Hello this morning.
This is an excellent poem with a keen thought expressed in the form of the Texas Cowgirl. I think you are saying that life has changed for all women today. If I read correctly, age bears dissapointments.
Fondly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 28-May-2010
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Hello this morning.
This is an excellent poem with a keen thought expressed in the form of the Texas Cowgirl. I think you are saying that life has changed for all women today. If I read correctly, age bears dissapointments.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you Rebecca you got it...Gary
Comment from Leigh Ann
This flows well, good rhyme and meter. It is so true times have changed. With age comes wisdom though. Sometimes our reality far out weighs the dreams we had as youth. Love and family is whats so important. Great piece. Leigh Ann
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This flows well, good rhyme and meter. It is so true times have changed. With age comes wisdom though. Sometimes our reality far out weighs the dreams we had as youth. Love and family is whats so important. Great piece. Leigh Ann
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thank you for reading Leigh Ann
Comment from laren
This is a lovely poem which tell us about old times, the old fashion way of living, more familiar, more in touch.
It's very well written, I really enjoyed reading it!
Congratulations!
Laren
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This is a lovely poem which tell us about old times, the old fashion way of living, more familiar, more in touch.
It's very well written, I really enjoyed reading it!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you laren
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You're welcome,
Laren
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thank you again Laren
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a flowing story about how life changes from being single and being married. Also about what freedoms and life styles are changed when life changes
I see no errors.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a flowing story about how life changes from being single and being married. Also about what freedoms and life styles are changed when life changes
I see no errors.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you dragonpoet for reading
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You're welcome, deepwater
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I'm crazy about country music, and wish some day l could live in a farmer, so, despite the sadness of the poem, life is hard for most woman in general...
Great job!
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I'm crazy about country music, and wish some day l could live in a farmer, so, despite the sadness of the poem, life is hard for most woman in general...
Great job!
Comment Written 28-May-2010
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thank you for reading Auroraboreal
