Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "The Friend"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from fairy77
A best friend. What a beautiful tribute to an animal:) Really enjoyed it and wish you luck on a great book. This is an excellent piece!beth fairy77.
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A best friend. What a beautiful tribute to an animal:) Really enjoyed it and wish you luck on a great book. This is an excellent piece!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good message. Seems that no one takes pride in their job anymore, which is why you end up calling and complaining so often about service and products and getting nowhere.
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Good message. Seems that no one takes pride in their job anymore, which is why you end up calling and complaining so often about service and products and getting nowhere.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from missjosi
Well everybody needs a friend..... nice piece of poetry with a nice rhythm........ something different I felt......................All the best :)
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Well everybody needs a friend..... nice piece of poetry with a nice rhythm........ something different I felt......................All the best :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a great tribute poem to true friendship, and I like the way you express the things that matter in friendship and what it means, especially how it gives a person confidence to be with friends. Giddy
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This is a great tribute poem to true friendship, and I like the way you express the things that matter in friendship and what it means, especially how it gives a person confidence to be with friends. Giddy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Glasstruth
A dog is truly man's best friend. I know my dog would do anything for me. She has my trust. This poem sort of sounds like a letter. Very nicely written. Les
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A dog is truly man's best friend. I know my dog would do anything for me. She has my trust. This poem sort of sounds like a letter. Very nicely written. Les
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
The photo of the dog is beautiful. The poem has strong wording with a nice rhythm. They are friends for life. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
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The photo of the dog is beautiful. The poem has strong wording with a nice rhythm. They are friends for life. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from risktaker
A great insight into the importance of a military dog. To protect them while sleeping is outstanding. A dog is an everlasting friend that is loyal and never abandons their owner. Dogs do their jobs with competency at all times. They provide love, comfort, and safety to their owners.
Message well expressed.
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A great insight into the importance of a military dog. To protect them while sleeping is outstanding. A dog is an everlasting friend that is loyal and never abandons their owner. Dogs do their jobs with competency at all times. They provide love, comfort, and safety to their owners.
Message well expressed.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from JudyS
deepwater, I think I might be reading out of order with this but the picture grabbed my attention first then the wonderful read. I used to have a dog that looked very much like the picture you chose. Great job, excellent read, I really enjoyed it. Judy
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deepwater, I think I might be reading out of order with this but the picture grabbed my attention first then the wonderful read. I used to have a dog that looked very much like the picture you chose. Great job, excellent read, I really enjoyed it. Judy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Good friends are truly hard to find, and your poem expresses so well what a good friend is - I don't think there're any better than man's bet friend - loyalty, devotion and unconditional love! Nicely expressed, though you never actually mention the canine, you DO describe the attributes of a good friend. :)
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Good friends are truly hard to find, and your poem expresses so well what a good friend is - I don't think there're any better than man's bet friend - loyalty, devotion and unconditional love! Nicely expressed, though you never actually mention the canine, you DO describe the attributes of a good friend. :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very interesting poem. It made me go over some of my own reactions to certain trials and tribulations. Nice imagery and the flow was wonderful. Nicely done.
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This was a very interesting poem. It made me go over some of my own reactions to certain trials and tribulations. Nice imagery and the flow was wonderful. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
