Writings From the Heart
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Comment from becky7777
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
you say so much in so few words. great poem. good luck
Becky
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
you say so much in so few words. great poem. good luck
Becky
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from Kingsland
This I had to read several times. Each time I read this poem. I retained a bit more than before. This was just an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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This I had to read several times. Each time I read this poem. I retained a bit more than before. This was just an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you john
Comment from Brendajay
I love this simple ode to love. The photo only enhances it. I like the "love blooms high" then the "as birds on wing." I think this is a perfect match. Good work and keep writing please!
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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I love this simple ode to love. The photo only enhances it. I like the "love blooms high" then the "as birds on wing." I think this is a perfect match. Good work and keep writing please!
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from PUPA
The choice of words, as well as meaning are expressed very well in this love poem, and I love the black and white picture, nice presentation.
Good luck.
Love
Pupa
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The choice of words, as well as meaning are expressed very well in this love poem, and I love the black and white picture, nice presentation.
Good luck.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from Donovan
I remember her back on the boardwalk. She was one of the first Avon ladies looking for clients, ringing doorbells. Nice words, that unfortunately do not make sense to me. But...I am not that bright.
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I remember her back on the boardwalk. She was one of the first Avon ladies looking for clients, ringing doorbells. Nice words, that unfortunately do not make sense to me. But...I am not that bright.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thanks
Comment from wierdgrace
this is great, and excellently written, and I loved it, it is perfect for this picture, and it looks like my family black and whites, good luck in the contest, a winner I hope no errors or revisions, I could find, loved it
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this is great, and excellently written, and I loved it, it is perfect for this picture, and it looks like my family black and whites, good luck in the contest, a winner I hope no errors or revisions, I could find, loved it
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
I'm always amazed how much can be said
in so few words, and this says it all.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
I'm always amazed how much can be said
in so few words, and this says it all.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thanks Nargaret
Comment from Jersey Dreamer
Hi poet,
This is a lovely meaningful poem you have written for the contest, I am sure you will do very well.
Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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Hi poet,
This is a lovely meaningful poem you have written for the contest, I am sure you will do very well.
Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thank you jersey
Comment from Bryana
In two lines you've written beautiful
thoughts. Yes, the love makes everything
bloom, and even realize the way the birds hail.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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In two lines you've written beautiful
thoughts. Yes, the love makes everything
bloom, and even realize the way the birds hail.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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thank you Bryana
Comment from FredCollingwood
These words say so much:
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
I think it's more of a challenge to say something with few words than when one has unlimited words. Excellent!
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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These words say so much:
The faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail
I think it's more of a challenge to say something with few words than when one has unlimited words. Excellent!
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you fred
